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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2010 4:29 PM Title: PHOTO SYNTHETIC

Oh, dear!
More time travel?
I fear your story's continuity
Is starting to unravel.

Author's Response: There have been small time travel plots in Chapter 3 and the one where Flyte was poisoned and fled to the future. But it won't take over the storyline.

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