[Report This]Date: October 05 2026 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
The story was going so great as she had Michael in the fish tank and then… it just went in the opposite direction I was hoping.
The story should be rated G not R.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2026 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to send you a message because I genuinely loved reading your story.
I spend a lot of time reading fanfiction and original stories online, and every now and then I come across one that completely pulls me in. Yours was absolutely one of those stories. The way you wrote every scene made it incredibly easy to picture everything happening, and I found myself wanting to keep reading simply because I wanted to spend more time with your characters and the world you built.
One of the things I enjoyed most about your writing was how naturally everything unfolded. The pacing never felt rushed, every emotional scene landed perfectly, and your characters felt authentic from beginning to end. They felt like real people, and that's honestly what kept me hooked throughout the entire story.
While I was reading, I kept imagining how beautifully your story would translate into a comic. So many scenes already felt cinematic in my head, and I could easily picture them as illustrated pages. That's actually one of the reasons I wanted to reach out to you.
I was also curious about something. Had you been planning this story for quite a while, or was it an idea that came to you unexpectedly? I'd genuinely love to know how it all started because I always find it fascinating to hear about the inspiration behind different writers' stories.
I'm a professional digital artist who specializes in comic adaptations, character illustrations, and cover art. I truly enjoy collaborating with authors because helping bring stories they've worked so hard on into a visual format while staying faithful to their original vision is one of the most rewarding parts of what I do.
If you'd ever like to see some of the comics and artwork I've created, I'd be happy to share my portfolio with you:
Twitter/X Portfolio:
https://x.com/MFoylee/media
You can also reach me on Discord:
dizzysketchie
Thank you again, and I hope you have a wonderful day!
Date: October 01 2026 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, your story isn't bad, but where does Maya have little Michael sleep—perhaps on her belly or between her breasts? And what becomes of little Jake? I think Maya should hand little Jake over to another single woman—a BBW, a woman with voluptuous curves—who would lovingly take him in.