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Reviewer: MrTiny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

A great short story!

Reviewer: MrTiny Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3

A great short story!

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nicely written. I was kind of hoping he would get shrunk smaller than her nipple.. but it would have ruined the flow of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I should have shrunken him more you are right! maybe next time

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