Reviews For Godess and slave under the sun
Reviewer: MrTiny Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
A great short story!
Reviewer: MrTiny Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
Date: April 26 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
A great short story!
Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Date: June 23 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nicely written. I was kind of hoping he would get shrunk smaller than her nipple.. but it would have ruined the flow of the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I should have shrunken him more you are right! maybe next time