Date: June 20 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Parents I
This has been my favorite chapter so far. I've been a longtime fan of unaware, and I've always wanted to read a story with this particular scenario. You're really good at creating a sense of impending doom and fitting a lot of tense descriptions into a small amount of text. Really looking forward to the coming chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, I hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters then, because I too am a fan of this scenario!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Parents I
bravo. chapter 10 was spectacular! it was incredible riveting. loved it. i am now a fan of this tale. well done
aaron
ps hope the cory and allison get anna's attention. also, thought that the detailed demise of patrick was astounding... and well toe-rific(sorry thats lame)
Author's Response: hey man, thanks for the continued support..I've got quite a bit planned for cory and allison..been a bit busy with work though, but I'll put these thoughts down soon =)