[Report This]Date: August 10 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
I love the whole premise of this story, especially the smuggling sections. Very well written, I hope you complete the story soon!
Author's Response: I'll be working on the next set of chapters in the coming days, hope you enjoy them!
[Report This]Date: June 29 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
This has my vote for favorite new story. I feel like I've been waiting a long time for this...keep it up!
Author's Response: thanks a lot, sorry if I've been keeping you waiting for a longer time though!
[Report This]Date: June 22 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Good stuff!
Author's Response: thanks! =)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Really awsome! some of the best stories I have seen in a while!! going to add you to my faves!
Author's Response: thanks a lot man, I've got a few ideas that are begging to be written..will be putting them down in the coming chapters
Date: June 21 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Absolutely love this story! Really good unaware action and great descriptions! Please keep going!
Author's Response: glad to know you like it mate, I loved reading your stories too, best plots I've ever come across..looking forward to your next one!
Date: June 20 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Erotica shouldn't make me hate everyone.
Author's Response: does it?
Date: June 19 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
wow, it's so good to read such kind reviews. I'm gonna put in a couple of chapters after this, I'm actually writing this stuff out as I go along, so hey, drop me some suggestions, I'm game for anything.
@zol: no worries man, I'll be keeping it micro for awhile in at least one of the storylines..
@Star Sage: hey man, thanks for the write up. I'm a fan, hope you enjoy the rest of my work..
[Report This]Date: June 19 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
As a fan of unaware vore, I support this. I love what you've already setup here, as the world is interesting, and the characters introduced so far are very human. Here's hoping for some vore involving a sandwich or burger, but whatever the case, I will continue to read this as long as you'll keep writing.
Date: June 19 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Thanks guys, yeah I loved reading the few unaware stories that are up here. I figured I'd contribute too, though I love a lot of different aspects, so I'm trying to incorporate as many different bits as possible. Things are about to change though, so far the party storyline has been aware giantess, but in the next few chapters I'll be switching to an unaware perspective while well...cant give away too many things huh? Hope you guys keep reading, I'll try to post up chapters regularly while my mind is still in these stories..
[Report This]Date: June 18 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Love your style, incorporating various vignettes involving micro and unaware. I will echo Zol and say there are far too few stories like this on the site. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Very good story so far. Keep up the great work, there are far too little unaware stories up here, sadly.
Date: June 17 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
thanks guys, I'll be putting up a continuation soon, but first, I've got another story to begin..as for the machine, more about it as the stories progress, but for now, it's a well known device used all over the world. Consider what life would be like if every home had a machine like this..
[Report This]Date: June 17 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
Oh no, poor John. Hope Amanda finds him, soon without consuming him. Great story so far. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
Ps does Amanda know of the machine or is it classified?
Aaron
[Report This]Date: June 17 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: A Midnight Snack
The beginning cannot be more interesting! Thanks, and please, continue and show us more of your job!