Date: April 01 2014 7:33 PM Title: The Condom Conundrum: Part V
This was a great story and all but chapters 13-16 doesn't have my words on my screen.
If you have the solution or if there is a problem can you comment back
Date: October 13 2013 11:10 PM Title: The Condom Conundrum: Part V
There are some missing chapters, I think 13-16, just figured you should know.
[Report This]Date: April 17 2012 7:25 PM Title: The Condom Conundrum: Part V
Ah, its refreshing to see a final chapter to one of these tales, and moreso to see one that doesnt let up in the slightest! Id still love to see a continuation of Son Burnt because Id love to see what you could do with a clearly dominant mother character who comes into the story fully formed and enjoying herself, but as my recent lack of chapters shows I know you can only write what you enjoy.
Hope to see you stick around for a long time to come!
Date: April 13 2012 11:39 AM Title: The Condom Conundrum: Part V
Very good. Glad to see something new from you again as your mother/son stories are the best! Given this is fantasy, still your scenes are believable and the conversation between the players is always natural and comfortable. You have a great knack for keeping things 'real' in an otherwise 'bizarre' encounter.
Hope you have more ideas for more stories, and looking forward to your next. Keep up the great work!
carnaj