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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmph! Where are those Corlandian witch-hunters when you need them? ;-)

Seriously, though: opening chapter or one shot, this was very intriguing. And, I thank you for sharing it with us.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man. I appreciate it. Not sure where the witch hunters were on that one but I have a feeling that if they show, they might not do so well. Glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is the hottest new story in ages. Great use of haunting dialog. Please please please write chapter 2, where Janie's next YOUNG friend gets eaten by her mother.
I love the way these centuries old women are eating boys, cutting off what little lifespan they'd have.
This has the potential to be as great as my long running tale with modelmrs. Don't leave it as a one off.

Author's Response: Nice to have a request. I'll think of something. Thanks for the review man!

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