[Report This]Date: August 08 2026 10:37 PM Title: Playing With Your Food
This is a great so far, the build up was entertaining.
Like that summer didn't immediately go full crazy with him the moment she got him, reprimanding him for being an idiot for shrinking himself without anyone's knowledge, and also having a bit of fun with him is nice characterization.
Emilia toying with him while unaware is nice, would be ironic if she turned out to be the more dangerous of the two. Though stealing a not-fully-tested piece of prototype tech isn't the smartest thing to do, almost want it to go wrong somehow; gets stuck at an inch tall for a day while the ring reboots, or the durability control fails (if it even has one lol, it is a prototype).
Either way, thanks for the chapter!
Date: August 08 2026 12:48 AM Title: You Like What You Like
You have made me a fan of vore. Like I said before, I love how you make the characters come alive. I am so happy that I am seeing someone in their prime writing stories and are active.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2026 10:10 PM Title: You Like What You Like
Great suspense and erotic tale thus far. I think it would be cool if we find out at the end that the one sister just got bored with her boyfriend and was tired of his fetish insistence and worked behind the scenes with her little sis to rid herself of him. Probably not where you're going with it, but the scheming which would be involved in that would be delicious.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2026 5:16 PM Title: You Like What You Like
I'm really loving this so far. Her new fascination with the whole kink, as her sister said, it fully takes over her obsessive personality until she gets bored of it. So I like the idea that she doesn't care about actually swallowing and ending him, and taking away his life, both because he wants it deep down, and because she clearly cares about her sister, as made obvious by her not wanting to do it if he's still with her. I think a part of Summer knows that long term, their relationship will never work, with him being so into this fetish, and her sister being so dismissive of it, that eventually, whether it's a year from now or 10 years, they'll just not work together due to differences. So I can see how Summer could view eating him as both fantasy fulfillment for both herself and him, but also protecting her sister in a weird fucked up way. Plus the potential playful revenge aspect if she gets her hands on him tiny
"you literally broke up with my sister just to get your rocks off with this fetish, that's fucked up, and she deserves better, so me eating you is for the best for all 3 of us really" type of perspective
Regardless how you go I'm absolutely loving this story. Vore is my favorite, and I know you hadn't initially written much of it until recently, but you've really taken to it, and it seems like you're really enjoying the writing dynamic of it as well
[Report This]Date: August 06 2026 6:01 PM Title: Save It for Your Dentist
I would love to see Summer toy with Ben for a few days, exploring all advantages of him being shrunk, before finally swallowing him. Amazing story so far! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2026 1:47 PM Title: You Like What You Like
Another fantastic story! Loving the build up.
Date: August 06 2026 12:03 PM Title: Save It for Your Dentist
Your chapter end note reads like Summer speaking. Sent chills. I am not a huge fan of vore but this chapter was amazing.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2026 6:07 PM Title: You Like What You Like
This was so good! It's such a fun idea and dynamic, her being interested in it. I definitely want to see how things go if/when he does shrink for her, and gets the satisfaction he's been desiring. So good
Author's Response:
Heyo, thanks for the review! Love hearing that it's off to a good start, and yeah I hope his journey to see what it's really like makes for an interesting read throughout!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2026 9:29 PM Title: You Like What You Like
Fun start! I assume this story is ending up with him becoming Summer's lunch, but I also think it would be fun to have her feed him to an unaware Emilia.
Also, I think you've had a couple scenarios where the guy is interested in size play and the girlfriend isn't. I was thinking it might be fun if the girlfriend and the guy are both into "light" size play, like bouncing around between her boobs, and then one of her friends or sister or whatever found him while he was tiny and decided to take things much further.
Author's Response:
Heyo, thanks for the review! Glad it's started as a good read. I'm not sure if Emilia's mouth will make it into the picture but I might yet find a way to make it happen with a bit of subterfuge.
And ACK, am I already re-using old setups and premises at this point? You're right I've gone down this road before, I wish it wasn't so effective. But I'll have to mix it up more in my newer stuff. Your suggestion is a great one, I'm gonna add that to the list of options for future pieces.