Date: May 27 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. Good to see you continuing with these characters and introducing a new threat. Definitely seems like Diane has been burned by men and wants to take it out on her new "toy."
Author's Response: Yeah, there's quite a lot I could tell about her character. Stay tuned for more!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love how this story is progressing, well done. Especially like the fact that Diane seems to have been in a relationship were she was either taking advantage of or for granted. Hope you tell her story.
Ps hope emily's doesn't give up hope.
Aaron
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouraging review!
Date: May 27 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I thought the bowl was leading to a meal
[Report This]Date: May 27 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be a good one I can feel it :)
On to ch. 3.
Aaron
[Report This]Date: May 27 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yep! Typcial case of abused person over-compensating. And, the fact she hasn't exposed herself totally, as yet, could mean that she's got scars--from previous relationships--that aren't just mental and/or emotional.*
*Sad-but-true. Some of the sick bastards,who give the male gender a bad name, are just smart enough to leave their girlfriends' faces alone.
Author's Response:
I have to say, your reviews are really enlightening. I now have a better idea of where to take the story. Thanks! :->
Date: May 26 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really liked the thrilling intro of this new female character.
I'm eagerly waiting to see where the story goes next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope to have the next chapter finished soon, so you don't have to wait long.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmmm! Sounds like a filthy rich super-model. I wonder if her disposition is as icy as her blue eyes?
Only the (hopefully) prompt posting of chapter 3 can answer that question. ;-)
Author's Response:
Well, it won't take another week for the next chapter to be posted, I promise ;-) It's funny, I haven't actually thought what her job's supposed to be, but super-model sounds about right.
Date: May 23 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad this story's back, especially the last 2 paragraphs of this chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. What an amazing start! My story will be a little while cause writing on this site is kinda frustrating. Well anyways I love the direction your headed with this awesome sequel.
Ps love the fact that your trying out something different with this one.
Aaron
Author's Response: Great to hear from you again!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Uh-oh! That sounded foreboding.