



[Report This]Date: April 09 2026 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 19 You Can't Go Home Again
Nicely done! Btw, still waiting on a reply from you on Discord when you can!




[Report This]Date: April 05 2026 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shake. Rattle. And Roll.
Holy shit that was crazy!!! Blake a real one
Date: April 05 2026 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 Most Friendship Is Feigning, Most Loving Is Folly
Oh wow !!! This just got interesting!!!




[Report This]Date: March 27 2026 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 A man on the Inside
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon




[Report This]Date: March 25 2026 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 Social Climber
HOT DAMN!!!
that was absolutely sexy as fuck chapter the mouth play was very well detailed and thought out
Blake got rizz like no other lol
great work




[Report This]Date: March 23 2026 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 Friends in high places
And so it begins I wonder how crazy things will get
overall great job I would try to work on spacing for paragraphs so it’s not cramped together and easier to read but other than that great work




[Report This]Date: March 23 2026 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 Something's Brewing
Oh wow new character already and Maddie is really growing on me she really is a fun character to see




[Report This]Date: March 19 2026 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 A man on the Inside
As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions.feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws




[Report This]Date: March 18 2026 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 A man on the Inside
Wow okay nice first chapter I really enjoyed this
some grammar errors here and there and I think the paragraph format style could be better but those are the only things that might need some work but overall great work