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Reviewer: Parksnrec212 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2026 3:26 PM Title: Cravings

Another great chapter! Love the mind games she plays with him



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!

Olivia was born to toy with the lucky men who get to be her playthings.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2026 11:48 PM Title: Deepening Mind Games

I know it’s a personal preference, but giant stuff is gag for me, I skip it 

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2026 12:53 AM Title: Loose Ends

He is living my dream x.x

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Date: April 02 2026 9:24 PM Title: Beta Program

Still looking forward to more X)

Reviewer: SunGod123 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2026 5:35 AM Title: Initiation

I loved this character, can’t wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Makes me so glad to hear that, thank you! Hope it continues to satisfy.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2026 12:51 PM Title: Initiation

He’s living my dream , I wish I could give up everything to belong to a woman and her ass D:

Reviewer: Parksnrec212 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2026 6:25 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

Created an account just to tell you how much I am loving this story!!  I am so excited to see where this goes. Love Olivia’s character!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words, that means a lot to me and I appreciate the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far; hope it continues to be a good one.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2026 7:37 PM Title: Careful What You Wish For

I’m dying of anticipation xD



Author's Response:

I appreciate that! It's taken me a bit more time to get into the meat of the story now that more action is happening, but hopefully what's been added so far has kept on entertaining!

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 27 2026 6:07 AM Title: Careful What You Wish For

Can’t wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2026 1:45 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

Love where this is going, hope Olivia gets him between her butt cheeks before too long. Maybe she will want to try the "attached to back of the thong" thing they saw at the strip club? And yoga class has come up, maybe she goes to yoga with him in her butt. 


Excited for more!

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2026 8:28 AM Title: New Perspective

Amazing, I wish I could give up my life to be a woman like Olivia’s toy D:



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree with you more. Glad you're enjoying the read so far.

Reviewer: SunGod123 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2026 5:19 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

I’m in love with this story, keep up the good work. I can’t wait for some more juicy literature!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far, that really means a ton to me! Things should pick up in intensity and craziness soon, so I hope it continues to be a fun read for you.

Reviewer: SunGod123 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2026 3:09 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

I’m in love with this story, keep up the good work. I can’t wait for some more juicy literature!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2026 6:11 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

Loved chapter 4, especially the girls with panties made from tiny guys. Hope Olivia cuts to the chase and puts him in her butt ASAP



Author's Response:

Really glad you're enjoying it! Don't wanna spoil much, but Ethan and Olivia will definitely be getting more time together for a variety of activities.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2026 6:43 AM Title: Field Research

Really interesting so far ^_^



Author's Response: I'm so glad that it's holding your interest so far! Hoping to pick up the pace with very soon in the coming chapter so I hope it continues to be a satisfying read.

Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2026 3:50 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions.feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

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