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Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2023 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was sweet and wholesome. Probably one of the giant girl's on this website I would happily be protected and cared by. 

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Stumbled upon this when looking at a your stories. And may I say, another great story. Short, sweet, and to the point.



Author's Response:

You're right, I seem to be doing less short 'n sweet stories recently, so I think I'll try writing one like this again. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: daniel10alien Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought of this picture while reading!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

short and sweet with good descriptions, nice work

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing.  one of the best stories ive ever read.  its kinda short but thats what i like about it.  if it went any longer it might drag on so you ended it at the perfect time.

Just picturing a giant teenage girl ( I love Brunettes) making an unlucky boy rub her feet and then feel sorry for him was very realistic.

I hope to see more stories like this and maybe a sequel if you think you can pull it off.



Author's Response: Wow, one of the best? Thanks very much! I believe aaron is already working on a sequel to this story. It should appear soon. Otherwise I'll be glad to try one myself.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story. Love the fantasy elements and the gentle yet dominant girl. I agree that it would be interesting to see what happens if the mother discovers him (though I would hope for a rescue).

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

That leaves even greater possiblilities, if he comes that close to sliding all the way down the mother's throat. I think I'm leaning in favour of modelmrs' preference.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice start

Reviewer: modelmrs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Being a mother myself, I'm rather hoping he gets found and eaten by Lila's mother, in a polite female manner, of course.
Very engrossing story.

Author's Response: That might make a good sequel. Of course, I'd then prefer it that Lila rescues him just in time!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great stsrt bro. Really was taken aback at how well this tale has played out so far. Can't wait for more.

Aaron

Author's Response: Chapter 2 is almost finished. Great to see that you like it!

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