This is a truly excellent story.  I'm generally not a fan of crushing- it always seems so final, but it is handled very well, and I am glad that the author included that though the son feels pain and discomfort from his mother's knowing and unknowing actions, his body has changed and regenerates slowly and painfully, ready for more abuse.  The word play and dialogue between mother and son is smooth and believable and the descriptive style of the writing is very good.  Even on a technical end, the story is a pleasure to read with seperated paragraphs and rarely even a mispelled word.

And aside from all that, it's damn hot too!  Keep writing Ace!

as well as that it would be nice to see the dad come into it with the same fate as the son as the mother doesn't remeber either of them and they could both end up in her shoe togother.

This is still very addictive, you build up the drama very well. Can't wait too see how mother and son react to this new situation.
Would like it if the Mom would do something unprecedented to her son for the trauma he's sustained under her glorious posterior. (like play on her feet)
Anyways hope you continue with this awesome story.

Aaron

I've been thinking about this story all day. You're a great writer. I'm glad you pay so much attention to the main characters' mental reactions.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments.  Glad you like it!

once again impressive chapters. on to 21.
aaron

Please don't mistake my previous criticisms for contempt, this story is fantastic. I'm loving the direction you've taken. The Oedipus complex adds an interesting layer to the story and I hope the mother's new found joy in her godliness is
a. Of her own doing and not the maids'
b. going to continue
because it's simply awesome, and it befits the story's status as a fetish work. I'm looking forward to seeing what her new slave is going to have to endure.

Author's Response: Once again, thanks for the comments.  As you've mentioned, I've tried to weave in more and more of the son's oedipal desires, so we'll see where it takes him!

nice, hope you keep pumpin' these babies out. i'm really enjoying this story. cant wait to read what happens next.

Another great chapter, I'm happy to report! I love that you had her discover him, as it has allowed added to the intensity of the story.  I almost get the feeling that she knows her son likes being a helpless plaything at her feet, as evidenced by her "finger job."  I like the possibilities for this story and can't wait for the next additions!

This is a great story and really showcases your skills at writing tense, foot-related scenes, where the woman is unknowingly about to crush someone she cares about. From this and your other story, I think it's a safe assumption to state that you're more of a fan of the woman infliciting pugent acts of humiliation unknowingly. However, I liked your dream scene that demonstrated the guy's fantasy of being his mom's tiny foot lint.  As I've commented many a time on stories such as these, I hope the mother really does discover her son at her feet, and winds up torturing and purposely smushing him.  That said, you're an awesom writer and whatever you do will be fun to read!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments.  I like to create stories that are a little more off-beat--I mean, obviously everyone here is attracted to women and their feet, and so making something more "desperate" helps, for me, to create something more original.  Anywho, I'll do my best to actually finish this story.  Thanks for the comments!

awesome story. i cant't wait to read more. are u the one who posted stories under the nickname of black_jack?if so coul u repost your old stories?

Author's Response: That was quite a long time ago, but yeah.  I forgot my password, and so I changed my name, lol.  Some of my stories are here, but for any of the rest, they've been lost into infinte cyberspace, I'm afraid.  Thanks for the comment.