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Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

You managed to surprise me. I wasn't expecting Samantha and Natalie to come to the rescue.

Like the name "Sleepy Lizard Clan".



Author's Response: Thanks! The name is partially based on a genuine legend from Australian aboriginal mythology.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Wow! I know that sizecraft game was trouble. But this is getting out of hand.

Good thing role palying games don't cause this much trouble in real life.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2010 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh! And, "Spring-heel Jack" is the nickname given to a super-agile prowler reported by many English pedestrians during the 19th century.

Author's Response: I thought sure I'd get several "facepalm" comments over this pun. Guess I was needlessly paranoid. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

Looks like a cool GTS fight going on in D.C.

Wonder what the agents will find in the Garhu caves?

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh dear. The sizecraft game stikes again.

Wonder what MarySue plans to do with the Washington monument?

Reviewer: modelmrs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

Blefescu. An interesting use of a place name from Gulliver's Travels.
I wonder where Deborah will deposit her Little Ray of Funtime next.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

Intresting chapther. I didn't expect a Ray/Deborah alliance.

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Date: May 08 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wonder what Deborah's doing in australia?

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

"Garhu" is a word i didn't expect to see in this story.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonder if the Doomsday Society really is behind this?

You got a good story going here. Keep the chapthers comming.



Author's Response: I shall, indeed. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

The wishbone resturant strikes again. This could get intresting.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

Mostly for Asukafan: no righteously indignant fish crows were really/truly hurt in the posting of this chapter.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

Another great chapther. Hope Ray Venn can get the answners he needs at the factory. And I hope the moderator gets the answners to his questions.

Keep the chapthers coming.



Author's Response: As if you had to ask. ;-D

Reviewer: modelmrs Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

So the Wishbone restaurant is back.

Will we be treated to a PANTY-MATTER EXPLOSION?

(Sorry, but I owed you a few choice puns, and yours have always amused me.)

Author's Response: Super-LOL! X-D

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

why do i get the feeling that this latest version of the roling playing game is going to be trouble?

As for the frist part of the chapther. i know anti-matter is powerful, but to destroy an entire world? That's some bomb.



Author's Response: Believe it or not, there's a conspiracy theory floating around that blames the 1909 Tunguska Incident on the explosion of a super-weapon being tested by Tesla in that part of Russia! So, if Aurora, Texas, did experience the crash-landing of an extra-terrestrial spacecraft, fifty years prior to Roswell, who's to say that the U.S. Army didn't salvage some of it for examination (and possible reverse-engineering) by Tesla? P.S.---a million "Whose Line..." points to anyone who can guess what literary allusion I was making in this chapter. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sounds like Barney doesn't want to go back.

Keep this story going. I want to see the agents victorious.



Author's Response: Oh, that's been my goal from the outset! The only problem, as with all good stories, is how to get there while keeping the audience simultaneously riveted along the way.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Special note: "Northwest Angle" is the nickname given to a region of Minnesota cut-off from the rest of the Gopher State by both Lake of the Woods and Canada.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

A giant pet ferret. Methinks you have been enjoying the works of another great author Pamelapleases.

Author's Response: That's nothing. There were _several_ inspirations that went into chapter 4. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Gromania shoulds like a place to avoid at all cost.

Nice thouch having Id.e.e.a headquarters in Crossover plain.



Author's Response: I owe it all to you. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Since when did Valentina have a kid with count Dracula?

Come to think of it what would a vampire/GTS-Goddess kid be like anyway?



Author's Response: If it helps, consider this Valentina to be one of many multiversal counterparts to the original version in STANLEY CHARM'S MEMOIRS. Similar to DC's Hypertime, or Marvel Comics "What If...," counterparts. As for Enorma? She's probably similar to the empusae in A SMALLER SHADE OF GRAY.

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