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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2018 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Why not finish this great story?

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

Please continue. Enjoying the story a lot.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

Dam, what's the news?

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Date: December 10 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Joe gets fired? Dam... I'll have to find out then.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm suprised this hasn't been reviewed yet. One thing I will say is to have the speech on seperate lines. On to the next chapter.

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