[Report This]Date: March 17 2025 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 Family Dynamics
Damn nice work man I’m loving the family already and yes to the armpit action!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2025 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 Shared in the Classroom
I decided to check this out after you mentioned it in your latest review of my story, and I’m glad I did as I’m really enjoying it :)
I’m loving the world you’ve built here and I’m very much looking forward to continue reading this.
Author's Response:
Awesome, I'm really glad you like it. I appreciate the approval. I'm just getting started, trying to figure out if I want one long anthology or multiple stories set in the same timeline. Please keep reading.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2025 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 A Star Finish
Wow absolutely amazing work the world building is next level and nice work in the glute action lol is was beautiful
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm really hoping people enjoy the world building aspect. I think I'm close to getting the basic worldbuilding done but there's still so much more to be said about this new era. Thanks for the repeat comments
[Report This]Date: March 16 2025 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 11 A Star Finish
So far I’m really loving the worldbuilding aspects! Hope to see more of that implemented in future chapters. I also hope we get so see how the mom Kelly treats Aaron. I’d imagine since she’s the kindest of the 4 Decker members and she’d treat him with a bit more respect while still demeaning him in her own way..? Maybe she needs to borrow him because she’s visiting another mom her bestie or somethin who also has a tiny of their own!
Could be a nice way to see Aaron interact with another tiny as the suburb moms converse talking about their regal status of owning a tiny and see how other people treat their tiny.
[Report This]Date: March 15 2025 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 A Public Exercise
HOLY HELL GLUTES CITY !
but great chapter and description of the size and muscle and Aaron being mesmerized by it
can’t wait to know auska more
[Report This]Date: March 15 2025 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 9 Gym Time
Amazing
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. More gym stuff incoming. Thanks so much for the comments
Date: March 14 2025 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 Gym Time
Hot damn !!!!!!
gym sounds like it going to be fun
crossing my fingers for glutes action…….also farts….sorry I can’t help myself lol
either way Aaron stargazing is cool too but seems to only take him so far love to see how he’s not completely helpless by using his brain
Author's Response:
Oh Aaron's got skills, but he's still adjusting. We haven't even been through a whole day yet in his new life routine. He's a special tiny though. I hope you enjoy chapter 10. I really wanted to fit all the gym scene into one chapter but I wasn't able to. Anyways let me know what you think. The feedback helps me keep going
[Report This]Date: March 14 2025 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 8 Big Brooke Becker
Wow Brooke is a very interesting character so far I love her already!
[Report This]Date: March 13 2025 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Alpha Giant and beta tiny
Amazing
Author's Response:
Just a taste of what's to come. Thanks for commenting
[Report This]Date: March 13 2025 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 Measure of Worth
Yaaaaayyyyy for fart scene ohhhhh hope we seen some more lol
wow Aaron got it real rough
also I maybe recommend adding like bolded words saying that this is the past and this is present just so is less confusing
overall great work
Author's Response:
Hey I'm glad you liked it. I'll be trying to layer more those in the story in the future. Looking over my story again I think you're right that it could benefit from a demarcation for Aaron slipping back into his past memories. Not exactly sure how I want to do it yet though, I want it to have a natural flow. If I figure it out though I'll go back and add it into previous chapters. Thanks for commenting again.
[Report This]Date: March 13 2025 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5 College Giants and painful memories
Wow pushing out the content fast and well color me impressed did you pre make this chapters or just very quick but effective writing
Author's Response:
A bit of both, I'm sure I can't keep this pace up forever but I'm having a lot of fun writing it and I've still got lots of ideas.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2025 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 4 Social Tiny
Awesome
Author's Response:
Hey thanks I appreciate the comment. Please keep reading and commenting
[Report This]Date: March 12 2025 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 4 Social Tiny
As someone who likes a cool plot and character dynamics in a story it’s nice seeing an interesting flashback and worldbuilding to this scenario of the shrinking virus. It definitely got me hooked into the overall plot.
Regarding ideas to integrate in future chapters. I’m actually interested in what Deans family is like as giants. A family dinner where all 4 Decker members eat and they each have a tiny companion near them who simply watch the giants converse ignoring their presence for the most part. I’d imagine each family member has their own set of tiny folks like dean has with the MC.
Maybe Kelly the mom is more formal, has multiple tinies unlike Dean, and she sees them as servants to ease her work stress and life. If they do well she rewards them, if they don’t… well… it would be cool if she even has a favorite tiny that she allows to accompany her to like family dinners for example. Maybe he gets entitled especially around the MC bc he’s the mom’s right hand tiny? Could be interesting.
the sis maybe she’s more sympathetic to tinies despite still seeing them as not equals to humans.
Idk about the dad but I’m sure you can get creative there haha.
I figure this would be a nice way to see what an average family is like living in a world with tiny people!
Anyways great chapter and story so far!
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the comment. You'll definitely be seeing more of the Beckers and seeing how Aaron interacts with the whole family. Unfortunately I don't think there will be multiple tinies, at least in the Becker house. There will be more tinies overall and Aaron will be interacting with them but I'm trying to craft a world where tinies are valuable not a dime a dozen. It's part of why I started this story I don't see many people taking this angle but I think it's very fertile ground. As for your ideas with the Beckers I think I can integrate a lot of them into the story even if there aren't 20 tinies running around. Thanks again for the comment and keep letting me know what you'd like to see, it helps give me ideas for chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2025 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 Social Tiny
Wow can’t believe how good this is and the sneak peek of upcoming characters is amazing
also to answer your question about what else I would like to see- personally maybe some actual unaware action, second maybe seeing a character that might actually have a crush on Aaron adding to his complex life !
10/10 chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm glad you appreciate it. I'm trying to weave the worldbuilding in naturally and not just do a lore dump but I've got quite a world mapped out already. There will be some unaware in the story. I tend to prefer aware stuff more but I think unaware can be excellent when done right. As for your last point, I think you'll be seeing that sooner than you might expect. Thanks again and keep commenting
[Report This]Date: March 12 2025 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 Lunch Lessons and History
Okay this story has really grabbed my interest and attention even thought I’m not a M/m kind of guy but this story is a rare exception.
Aaron is a cool MC and I love his acceptance and fight towards his current situation and status.
Dean seems like a fun cruel character that will probably grow on me
Alexis is already my favorite giant character so far
overall world building is great and hope to see other tinies and giants in whatever capacity is possible.
in terms of smutt - I won’t lie you passed the test in terms of olfactory/pure odor stuff ( Alexis smelly toes and dean boxers) - so hope we see more of that and extra stuff like armpit, farts, burps, and so on. Just personally speaking
other stuff could be vore, butt for starters but overall great job and keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the comment, I've grown quite attached to Alexis myself. Armpits, Farts and Burps will definitely be making regular appearances so no worries there. I'm finding it hard to get all my ideas in one chapter chunks but I'm just getting warmed up with this story. Please let me know if there's anything else you'd like to see included and please keep commenting.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2025 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Deans Drawer
Whoa !
Three chapters already ! I really like the story, even if foot stuff isn't exactly my kink !
Nice world-building also ! And I wonder if Aaron will manage to rekindle some sort of friendship with Dean or if he'll have to fully see him as his Master/God to survive !
Author's Response:
I explored this briefly in one of my recent chapters. Please let me know what you think
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2 Shared in the Classroom
Please continue!
Author's Response:
Oh I'm just getting started. I'm going to try sprinkling some more world building into chapters. I hope you like what you see. Let me know if there's any scenarios you'd like to see play out
Date: March 11 2025 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Deans Drawer
I think I'd like to discover that Dean actually have some romantic feelings for the MC. It seems strange to just put him in hix boxer like that otherwise, even if he probably doesn't want to admit it.
Also, I wonder if he isn't partially acting out on feelings of inadequacy compared to his former best friend, since MC went to an Ivy League College and Dean didn't.
Also don't hesitate to respond directly to a comment, as an author you can here haha !
Author's Response:
There's definitely some complex feelings coming from Dean towards Aaron. Keep reading and let me know what you think of how it progresses
Date: March 11 2025 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Deans Drawer
Hey thanks a lot, this is my first story but I've got a lot more ideas. They'll definitely be some complicated relationship dynamics explore between those 2 to say the least. There'll be wide variety of other giants in the story but Dean's our MC primary owner so we'll be seeing plenty more of him. I really appreciate the review. Let me know what you'd like to see and I'll try to include it in this mind palace I'm building
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Deans Drawer
A very interesting start ! I wonder if Dean has more feelings to the MC that he let on !