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Reviewer: grantb33 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 2:29 AM Title: CIVIC SIEGE

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Reviewer: amanda Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2010 5:35 PM Title: CIVIC SIEGE

Comics......yawnnn how boring when are you going to grow up timescribe xx.

Amanda.



Author's Response: When you stop fixating on urine. I grew out of that at 6 years old.

Reviewer: amanda Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2010 4:58 PM Title: CIVIC SIEGE

94 stories wow and all the same theme well done this must be record for this forum,i am impressed Timescribe..... but bored with it all.

Amanda.



Author's Response: I thought you spent weeks in December telling us all how you were going elsewhere.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2010 4:09 PM Title: CIVIC SIEGE

I'm going to be nitpicky here so I hope I don't offend. Still don't agree with some of this (Flash is suicidal? Elasti-Girl eats her own son?). But it's a vore story so it's more based in fetish than character, I suppose.

Don't think Wonder Woman and Talia were alive for centuries, at least not in the comics. This version might be different.

I did like seeing Doll Man, Giganta, Leviathan, the Shade, and all the others. I think we just disagree in our takes on the DC heroes. Sorry I'm being picky and taking this stuff too seriously (as I often do).



Author's Response: I don't mind your comments at all. It's fun analysing this stuff. I knew I was breaking all the rules with this story, and just wrote to please my own preferences. I wouldn't have had Elastigirl eat Beast Boy if he was her real biological son; but she did look great expanding in the Teen Titans Season 5 episode 1 cartoon and I just couldnt help myself. I took license with WW and Talia too, although some Wonder Woman writers (like the 70s TV show writers) mentioned Wonder Woman knowing ancient people (Socrates, I think). Very little of what I've written is in character. WW would never have eaten Atom, but the cartoon imagery made me want to write it.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2010 8:15 AM Title: CIVIC SIEGE

Great opener!

I'm surprised Sir Pixis hasn't beaten me to the reviews, though. He's an even bigger comic fanboy than I am!

Author's Response: I wanted to be careful not to tread on his ideas. He's done a great job crossing over the DC Universe and GTS in at least 2 of his stories, which are among my favourites. I hope he likes this too.

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