Date: March 15 2025 4:48 PM Title: Welcoming Isley
You continue to produce excellent chapters of this story. Ashley's childbirth scene was beautifully written. I appreciate the world-building you have put into this story. The defanging procedures sound absolutely horrifying, but that made me think that perhaps one or two adjustments could be made that would be worth checking out for Ashley. It makes sense to me that at least some of them could be beneficial without being too intrusive. It would be a good way to show this world's level of science, as we have really only seen that in the most recent chapter with the nanobot scene.
It does feel like Ashley should have more confidence now after giving birth.
I also hope we will see more of Julia and Ashley's parents. I was surprised when they were not there for the wedding, and that the wedding only involved signing a bunch of papers.
I also hope that Ashley's eggs remain a plot point and I am wondering if Ashley is going to mention what Nelson was doing to her or rather, what she was not doing.
Another review mentioned a harem, and I would love to read the story go that route, especially if the other members of the harem would be different sizes compared to Barbara and Julia, and that Ashley would be the second in command, so to speak.
Two things I would like to mention. The first is that I would love to have a scene where Ashley is breastfeeding Barbara. And the 2nd is that this story deserves the FF/f tag.
This really is an amazing story, and I hope there are many more chapters to come :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
As I said to another comment, I don't think I want to go the harem road - at least not yet. Also, don't know about the parents, they really are minor characters and not sure we'll see them again, I want to focus on Ashley and her situation, really.
I'll continue the egg plot, yeah, at least for a time. We shall see where it goes.
Thanks again and stay tuned ^^
[Report This]Date: March 14 2025 10:01 PM Title: Welcoming Isley
I really liked the cockvore scene! Ashley being the one to push for it was a fun power inversion, and it was really hot to read how aroused it made Julia. I also love love love muscular, smelly Julia! More abs! More biceps! More thighs!
Julia needing to spend time away from the family from work is an interesting twist to the dynamic, and a good way to get Ashley and Barbara closer together. I wonder how Julia is dealing with her urges while she is away?
Speaking of Julia's urges, we haven't seen her truly violent side in a while. It's something she may have been working on with Barbara while Ashley was in the coma, but I think it's still an important part of her character. I want Ashley to witness Julia inflicting severe, bone-breaking pain on Barbara. Will this frighten Ashley, or arouse her, or both?
I think another comment brought up the idea of Julia expanding her harem of partners. I am not opposed to this, if you introduce new characters slowly enough for us to get to know them. It would be interesting to see Ashley take a role in this. Maybe Julia could have Ashley and Barbara interview candidates to bring into their relationship in some capacity. Just don't give us too many new names at once.
The birthing chapter had a lot of good tension! Barbara's frantic rush and powerful footsteps (I love how strong she is!) were great at setting the scene. The world-building with the collar salesfuta was a nice touch, and it was great to see Barbara get so angry about it. And of course Dr. Nelson was a good twist, especially the way she starts to acknowledge Ashley's strength by the end.
I wonder how Isley having a tiny mother will affect her growing up. It seems to impact her legal status a bit, in that she has less right to own Ashley than Samantha does. Will she face discrimination or bullying growing up? Will this make her resentful of Ashley or push them closer together?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
I don't think we'll see Isley beyond her current age (or close to) in this story... but who knows, I have sort of an idea for a sequel. We're not there yet however.
Regarding Julia's libido and needs, they'll be explored next chapter but I don't think I'll go the harem route. May change my mind however, when in front of the screen actually writting XD
I wanted to show a six meters tall futa entirely unleashed with Barbara, who went full mother hend mode and simply couldn't contain her own strength to normal levels... and Julia's been working out, so the effect would be even crazier !
We shall see a little more of Doctor Nelson next chapter, I think.
Stay tuned for more, in any case ^^
Date: March 13 2025 2:17 PM Title: Welcoming Isley
Yeah, this world keeps on getting worse. Now we are at forced body modification (after it was already established that they can't even hurt them). Especially, considering doing that to the babies, it's really gotten dark here.
Shows also the hypocrisy of discrimination: "I'm a better person, more civilized, and as any civilized person, I'll torture you and your babies to death."
I really hope it's going to get better. That finally some positive changes will be implemented.
Not sure how much more my fragile heart can endure.
This world really needs a purge. Either something that deactivates the virus or kills everyone with it off.
Or something worse (I know measures for worlds beyond saving).
Author's Response:
You can blame sanguine tangerine and the other crazies of the discord server for that. They put those dieas in my mind and, well, here we are.
But I do plan things to get better, first at a personnal level, and then going up. Basically, this chapter was it in a microcosm, with the interaction between Ashley and Doctor Nelson.
Thanks for the review, as always by the way :) !
Date: March 05 2025 5:05 PM Title: Cockvored
Another great chapter.
One thing that has surprised me is the lack of discussion about Julia and possibly Barbara needing to take additional lovers. Barbara might be fine with just Ashlyn considering she is older and submissive, but Julia would definitely need to take lovers given the vastness of the limbo for a futa.
I am curious about Ashley's pregnancy While it could be completely normal, the emphasis on how large her baby seems to be makes me wonder if she could be carrying twins.
I also have two ideas that I'm not sure I want to happen, but I will share them here. The first is that the hospital made a mistake, and the baby is not actually Julia's.(it's a girl) The second idea is a continuation of the first, where the hospital and/or Julia takes the baby away from Ashlyn.
Which would almost certainly be enough to push Ashlynn to be suicidal.
I would not like to see the second idea come to fruition. I just wanted to share it.
Looking forward to the next chapter, i'm really excited to find out how the wedding will go.
Author's Response:
I hadn't even thought about additonal lovers. I guess I'll have to add that in the future chapters, as the story decided to be expanded somehow ! Damn it !
Remember that Ashley is really small, barely 1m42. Even a normal sized baby is big for her. And Isley ? Well, we'll see soon enough what's the situation is about her, I'm not spoiling anything !
Regarding what may happen with the delivery of the baby and all, I won't say, as I don't want to spoil, sorry, but stay tuned, and remember, I struggle to write cruel stuff ! I really do !
Thanks for the review, it helps a lot :) !
Date: March 04 2025 8:24 PM Title: Cockvored
What still grates me quite severely is that nobody seems to care what happens to the future half-siblings of Isley. As of now, they are going to be trained in a facility to be distributed as good little pets to willing owners. Probably so brainwashed that they'll be little different from actual animals.
One would think Ashley or even Julia would mind the fate of the little mini Ashleys. Yet they didn't even talk about them.
Author's Response:
The thing is that neither of them can do anything and :
The whole event is too much for Ashley to really comprehend. She's basically lost her reproductive freedom and doesn't want to deal with it because it's not something she ever considered and with her own traumas, she believes it's better left untouched.
Julia is seething but those are out of her hands and she doesn't really care about the tiny siblings of Isley eiher, beyond the fact that she believes all should have been hers.
And Barbara is happy that more tinies will be born but not really that Ashley was robbed of something, so she is conflicted about it and decided to basically not touch the whole deal. Better not to poke a still sore wound, basically.
Also, it hasn't came to my mind to use it in the story, but I guess it may happen now. Congratulations, you may have increaed the length of the story beyond what Inhad in mind xD !
Date: March 04 2025 12:30 PM Title: Planning the future
I have to say, this story is very good, I love the characters, Ashley is awesome, Julia's developement and growth is incredible, the smut scenes are very good. I hope you keep writing this story for a long time, is there an idea on the amount of chapters you want to write?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise !
I'm always worried that my smut part are too tame/bad and my plot parts boring, so I'm always glad to see both are liked :).
As for the length remaining, I think I can see the end in a handful of chapters... but nothing is set in stone !
Date: March 03 2025 8:31 PM Title: Planning the future
My what an interesting idea Ashley has, hope she will test both Barbara and Juli balls to see which one is more comfortable.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
You'll see soon enough what Ashley does with those nuts xD !
[Report This]Date: March 01 2025 1:09 AM Title: Planning the future
Interesting developments! Barbara is being so sweet with Ashley. The imagery of Barbara holding her in her mouth was so powerful; I loved how vulnerable Ashley was.
I can see that Ashley and Julia need to build their relationship back up a bit. I like that you are fully acknowledging how hard the time gap is on them, and how Barbara and Julia have their own relationship now.
I really liked Ashley trying to soften Julia with praise! I hope we see more exploration of Julia's younger mindset, with her seeking validation from Ashley. It gives Ashley a good measure of power in the relationship. (But not quite enough to get knocked up by Barbara.)
Are they going to a country where tinies still have rights? That will be an interesting change in dynamic! e.g. no collar in public. Ashley may be confronted with the opportunity to escape - to be free from Julia, to live independently. And of course she won't take it, but this will have an effect on her relationships.
Cock vore incoming! How will she breathe in there??
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the review !
Yeah, the strain of the passage of time was something that convinced me to go with the ten months time-skip. Building up the relationship is hard and we can expect some strain to still come to the fore.
I won't say more on the BarbaraxAshley relationship because it'll be expanded upon in the remaining chapter. Same for the possibility to go to another country, you'll see if it's possible or just a pipe dream next chapter.
A lot of answers will come with chapter 20 !
Date: February 28 2025 2:59 PM Title: Stays at home
Another good chapter. It was really well written, especially how Barbara deliberately and insistently took a submissive role to Ashley, which clashed with her trauma. That is definitely something I would like to read more of, as the tiny Dom/giant sub is one my favorite tropes in these kinds of stories. It also makes me wonder if Julia would be willing to make an attempt at being submissive to Ashley. After all that she has put Ashley through, she could at least make a genuine attempt at it.
As for the mysteries coming up the next chapter, the first being why Julia and Barbara dont want to talk about the move, and the second being what Ashley has planned for Julia. I have some theories about what it could be. For the first one I feel like the most probable cause is the girl that Julia killed had influential parents/friends, so while there were no legal consequences, they could have put roadblocks in Julia's career path.
For what Ashley is planning, I have three theories:
1. Julia and maybe Barbara will not have any sexual activities with her, putting her love for Ashley on one side versus her sexual urges on the other.
2. has to do with her potential 2nd child, that being that she doesn't want to have it with Julia, maybe have it with Barbara or not at all, or maybe getting inseminated to have a boy or a girl.
3. is that Ashley would like to have a gun for shelf defence.
My final thoughts: It was really cute to read how Ashley was with Samantha, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
p.s.“Another shot at your milk? Can’t I have something else?” Julia asked. It's meant to be Ashley asking this, isn't it?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
Regarding the ps, it was indeed a typo, it has been corrected, thanks for your keen eye !
I'm glad you liked it, I tried to show another power-dynamic compared to what had been explored until now, and I'm quite happy with how Ashley and Barbara's relationship is progressing. Regarding Julia being submissive, it'd be somewhat strange to me - but it's not impossible, I don't really know where this story is going anyway XD !
Regarding your theories, I can only say one of the things you wrote is right, but the others are not !
You'll see soon enough which one it was, don't worry !
[Report This]Date: February 24 2025 1:12 AM Title: Return to the livings
I really like the direction this chapter went! Ashley was starting to get comfortable, but the core of the story is Ashley’s struggle. I applaud you for making the bold decision to change the status quo and add tension back to the relationship.
I liked the restaurant scene. It was nice to see all of Ashley’s friends, tiny and futa, come to her aid. I loved the detail of the futas not allowing hard alcohol to their tinies.
The Breeding Act is wild! Do these Radicals even know any tinies? Julia’s intense response, compounded by the time pressure of Ashley’s fertility, makes perfect sense.
I hope Ashley can take the time to figure out what she wants out of life and what happiness means to her, considering the situation she is in. She can still find joy in books, her relationships, and hopefully her growing family.
Julia showed a huge amount of growth in offering to transfer her ownership! I wonder how she’s been dealing with her violent urges, with the stress of Ashley in a coma and a newborn at home. I’m not surprised she killed that futa. I wonder if that had any lasting effect on her.
Ashley is still very self conscious about being replaced by Barbara, and also about sex in general. It was so sad to read how she was worried her family would find the dildo in her corpse. I want Barbara and Ashley to really talk about the crazy circumstances that brought them together. And hopefully the futas can encourage more confidence in Ashley.
Ashley is about to be surrounded by futa children, between Julia’s kids and her half siblings. I am eager to see how she handles the stress of helping to raise them, and eventually her feelings as they outgrow her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, as always !
I really liked the restaurant scene and how it allowed me to give some sense of normalcy for Ashley (before yanking it from her, because a good story needs bad events !).
I'll be honest, Radicals and Supremacists are mostly here because I don't know how to NOT worldbuild too much for my own good. But I'm glad they are here, they make the whole setting feels more complete to me. And if someone wants to pick up on it to make a spin-off or something, it gives more material to do so.
Regarding Julia, Barbara and Ashley and their growth, the next few chapters should have that in spades as I managed to find a way back to an idea I had in mind way back when I just wondered if this story deserved to be more than a one-shot ! I hope the just released chapter (Stays at home) will be to your liking starting that evolution !
Date: February 23 2025 3:50 PM Title: Return to the livings
This chapter took an unexpected twist, and I am unsure how to feel about it. On one hand, it feels like there were lot of missed opportunities, such as Ashlynn meeting Julia's friends and the exploration of a three-way relationship between Ashley, Julia, and Barbara. On the other hand, I can see the appeal in the direction the story has taken. Nonetheless, the story is great, and I am going to keep reading to finish it. However, I am a bit worried that it will be over soon as it was intended to be a one-shot. Fair enough, but I would really like more. Have you ever considered doing an alternative story path, like Ashlynn being in the hospital for only ten days or something similar?
p.s I think we really need a scene with only Ashlynn and Barbara.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
That change wasn't planned. Initially, I wanted to have something with only a few hours of coma and then a disfigured Ashley having to deal with the situation, a Julia that was going off a very dark road again, etc. But I found myself writing the chapter as it was currently released, which surprised me ! But I found it opened some possibilities I hadn't even considered before. And I'm running with it !
Even if I understand why it could be jarring/divisive, that chapter left me wondering if I should rewrite it for a shorter ellipse and the like. In the end, I felt that it was better to keep it as it was.
And the following chapter is strictly Barbara and Ashley together ! Finally ! I hope you'll like it when it'll be finished (I've written rougly two third of it).
For the alternate story paths, I'll think about it when this story will be finished ! WHich will happens who know when. At least, I don't know yet haha !
Date: February 20 2025 1:13 AM Title: Introducing the fiancée
I thought it would be the typical power story where the giant is extremely evil and has no context beyond that, but I was surprised by the fact that his behavior evolves. I love the little details of the clothes, shoes and everything else, how the physical characteristics impact the characters, how Ashley slowly becomes more submissive to Julia, how Julia becomes that more compassionate side towards Ashley, it's just beautiful. I don't know, in a previous chapter I saw that Ashley came when she saw Julia twice her height, it would be amazing to see a bigger Julia in the future, that eclipses Barbara Bauer or that the smaller futas look the same as Ashley's scale. I think it could give it an interesting touch because of Julia's addiction to power.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
Sadly, no more growth spurt for the characters in the story, but frankly, Julia doesn't need it to be dominant haha !
Date: February 18 2025 7:08 PM Title: Introducing the fiancée
Well that took a turn. Wasn’t expecting this. Yea that blonde won’t live past Ashley if she dies, might not anyway if Julia decides to.
Author's Response:
We'll see what Julia did (or didn't) next chapter haha ! But thanks for the review :) ! And I'm glad that the last part of the chapter was striking !
Date: February 18 2025 6:08 PM Title: Introducing the fiancée
Well, now we'll get to know if hospitals for tinies even still exist or if discrimination took hold there as well. The fact that they are systematically shut off from communication and information doesn't leave much hope.
Though at least there are children, which are all small. Which on the other side leads to the very disturbing thought of what happened to the children who didn't yet hit puberty. Their parents taken, them being shoved into hamster cages, at the mercy of sex-crazed lunatics. Maybe at the age of three. That's quite the horror.
It's even questionable if this attempted killing will be more than a simple offense in court.Yet it might pose one of the only ways for things to get better, if super-infatuated futas get all violent. And it seems quite common that they become super violent about their tinies.
Especially, it poses a problem if they're supposed to raise mixed children, while essentially be considered a lesser race that has no access to any facilities.
Though for now this world is still super-dystopian and it makes one quite sad to think about together all the implications of destroyed existences and torture of beings simply for being not as big.
I hope a bit that to the end there might be a brighter outlook at the world, without little girls who can only hope they'll make it alive till adulthood, only to be put into a life as possessions without any rights.
Author's Response:
Well, it will remain a dystopian world as inequality is backed in the setting I'm afraid but when it comes to infrastructures and the like it is light years better than our world.
Also, woman x futa only gives futa or male (extremely raremy), so no mixed children basically.
But that violent event will have personnal and societal repercussions ideally, if I manage to write it down properly.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 9:02 PM Title: Drawing from the heart
The golden shower was hot! If I were Ashley, I’d just go along with it. It makes Julia happy and it doesn’t seem like a big deal - it just runs off in the shower. But the power of Julia’s stream was awesome! I love when Ashley gets aroused by Julia’s power. If Ashley doesn’t want to get “marked”, maybe we can get more of it with Julia on Barbara.
You’re really trying to get me to like Ripley :) She did seem supportive! She has totally valid fears that Ashley has Stockholm Syndrome. I’m really looking forward to her meeting Julia.
I loved how you wrote the sketch reveals! You did a great job reminding us how violent Julia’s mind can be, but also how much she adores Ashley. In the violent sketches, I see Julia’s rage. But I also see recognition. The second sketch, with Ashley destroyed by Julia’s cock, shows that Julia knows what would have happened. As angry as she was at Ashley’s rejection, it was the best possible outcome.
It’s heartwarming to see Ashley and Julia communicate about how much they care for each other.
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah, the golden shower was a spur of the moment but it was a good way to show that Julia's every action was truly mighty and too much for Ashley to endure.
Ripley is really a supporting character to her core, truly a friend like we could have a best friend !
The "bad" sketch reveal was an addition on the moment, but the beautiful ones were what I wanted to show in the chapter, but I realized a contrast was needed to make those more impressive.
And they are progressing in their relationship in healthier ways !
But does it mean Julia has lost her darker parts... We shall see, soonish.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2025 12:28 AM Title: Threesome Troubles
I’ve really enjoyed how you explore Ashley’s insecurities in the relationship. All three of them have blind spots. Ashley pointed out very obvious things to both futas during her outburst, but she herself can’t believe the obvious truth that Julia is infatuated with her.
Julia feeding Ashley was great, as was her recognizing, unprompted, that Ashley needs normal meals too. Julia’s getting better! I love how you incorporate food and other basic necessities into Ashley’s humiliation.
I feel sorry for the futas that their relationships are primarily sexual. It sounds lonely. I think the futas understand lust and sexual pleasure, and perhaps even love, but they seem to lack joy in their lives. Where is the laughter, the contentment? It reminds me of Major/minor where the bigger race is hornier but often less socially adept. I really like that Ashley can teach them something, that her role in the relationship can be the emotional navigator.
It will be nice to see Ashley and Barbara bond a bit over books! They can borrow from each other. I hope Julia doesn’t get too jealous. It was really touching when Julia got upset that she had never made Ashley as happy as when she talked about books. Barbara, as far as we know, is not a psychopath and can connect with Ashley in ways that Julia cannot. I wonder if Julia can learn from how Barbara interacts with Ashley. Not necessarily Julia submitting to Ashley, but being a slightly more normal person to her.
I can’t wait to see Julia’s drawings!
Author's Response:
Reacting a bit late as I hadn't much time sadly ! I'm glad you're still liking the story haha ! Hopefully that'll continue in the future :) !
Date: February 11 2025 7:53 PM Title: Threesome Troubles
Truly an interesting story can’t wait to see more, and I hope we will see some Ashley and Barbara one on one action.
Author's Response:
That should happen in the future !
Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: February 07 2025 2:41 AM Title: Abudcted
I love this story! The dynamic between Julia, Ashley, and Barbara is really hot and I can't wait to read what type of kinky shit they'll get up too. As soon as I read Miss Bauer deepthroating Julia all I could think about was Julia cock voring Ashley then cumming her down Miss Bauer throat then being brought back up since Julia wouldn't ever let any serious harm happen to her. Anyways definitely one of the hottest giantess futa stories I've read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
I think that Julia would veto a deppthroating release of Ashley from her balls. But now I have that idea in mind, so who knows !
Date: February 06 2025 8:58 PM Title: Meeting the new pet
Very fun to see Ashley get so jealous. Julia needs to take her out on a proper date! And I’d like to see them spend more time together that isn’t them having sex.
Marriage is happening faster than I expected! Will Ashley get any new rights, or is it just a legal formality?
It was so cute to see Ashley cling to Julia’s leg for security. Barbara is odd! “ I want to not be seen as a Futanari, that would rob tinies of their opportunities!” right after robbing Ashley of her job opportunities…
I sort of understand Barbara’s motivation, but I feel like the narrative is moving a little too fast. Barbara was set up as this big, secondary antagonist to Ashley. I think there should be more negative feelings to work through: regret from Barbara and lingering fear/resentment from Ashley. And the characters feel a bit too articulate and direct at describing what they want - real people sometimes struggle to convey their feelings, and you need to look at their actions as much as their words.
I am a little worried about Ashley’s safety between these two giants. The neck tug was concerning. What would happen if Ashley gets injured - how would that affect Julia?
I loved Julia acting like her cock belonged to Ashley!
Author's Response:
I wanted to adress Barbara's motivation head on, but then I realized it would be more dramatic in the next chapter (wherever I'll be able to start writing it ><).
Ashley has acquired quite a large catalogue of things to be angry at to the two giantesses she'll be spending the evening (and more?) with. It should be fun.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2025 3:11 PM Title: Meeting the new pet
I need to say that Julia sometimes makes hope that something about this can work out and then the bad stuff she does overweigh so stupidly much that it's not funny anymore.
Getting rid of Ashley's books, something she knew was important to her and her happiness, that was messed up. It certainly wasn't about space. There's absolutely no justification but that she again wanted to destroy her personality by eliminating one of her interests that isn't her. But that's not how there's even a chance that they'll have something remotely resembling a relationship where Ashley can feel as a person that matters. If Ashley can't have any interests then we're again at her being an empty shell at Julia's mercy, which supposedly isn't the goal (despite all the practical evidence against this).
It's a bit infuriating how Julia claims to have Ashley's well-being in mind and intends to gift her everything, only to run right over her and not give a shit about her wishes (well one shit, given chapter 12). Ashley can tell as often as she wants that she doesn't want something, but Julia takes even the autonomy of her body away from her (which ties really badly back to reality when I see Trump supporters raise canvasses that read "Your Body, My Decision"). If she truly cared the slightest bit about her mental wellbeing she'd listen. Yet sadly Ashley always loses all personal agenda, hopes, dreams, and even her mind the moment she gets into any remotely sexual situation and goes into sex slave/pet/toy mode. Even those that by all accounts shouldn't be the slightest bit pleasant for her (I mean asscrack, seriously?). It's kinda sad that the only times when she speaks up isn't when she wants something, but only to be needy of her owner. That should even bother Julia, as her future wife lost all hopes and dreams of her own. Can't see much of the old Julia in that. That becomes especially apparent when she's by herself and simply stops being a person, but some dog that only has her owner on her mind.
Barbara is certainly messed up. Her reasoning is hard to follow that she hurts tinies because she loves them. She wasn't lashing out at Julia when she specifically targeted Ashley and HER hopes and dreams and intended to put an end to them, so her justification doesn't make sense. Yet I feel particularly sorry for Marina and hope something good will happen to her in the story. Yet I have no idea what Barbara was even intending to say. Marina is a bad tiny who deserves being tortured, because she's regularly getting abused and has to take it? What does Barbara think Marina is supposed to do in a world where tinies became disposable property (tying back to the news where tinies get killed in sex crimes; certainly without murder charges for the perpetrators)? She's in no position to ask for help, because everyone around her and all of society supports the one torturing her. Marina's mind was broken by all that happened and Barbara claims she's at fault? Is she seriously unable to catch the idea that confidence has to be built up and that people may have personality issues after constant torment? As I said, messed up, and the fact that Ashley basically agreed with her, by going along in the discussion is slightly infuriating.
In addition, the part with the leash showed again quite how little care everyone shows for her. Her frickin neck could have snapped! That it only lasted a second doesn't help there. Snapping a neck doesn't get that much better even if it only lasts a second. That's by the way how most hanged men died. The sudden pressure on the neck, not the strangulation. She could've died there. Not sure how the leash was even supposed to make her look like someone even remotely fit to be in a superior position to Barbara.
Damn, how much I'd wish for some karmic throwback to all those who're yet guilty of all this neglect to those they consider smaller and lesser. I like it far more if those experience the things they make others feel. The futas are all so high of themselves that they certainly don't deserve the happiness they can only gain by taking and destroying others without any care. Maybe a virus that only targets them. Maybe the tinies will develop something. Can't even see how that society makes for any intellectual jumps the way everyone is hormone controlled.
Nonetheless, good writing. Even if it's mostly rage, it triggers my emotions.
Author's Response:
I guess rage appreciation is a thing ? I didn't want to trigger you that way haha !
The two futas are pretty messed up, yeah. But since the way they are messed up is so different, it may come to blow in Julia's face (spoiler, it will next chapter) and Ashley will make use of it.
Remember that Ashley herself is a victim of trauma and that she's suffering herself. But I do plan of having her reverse some things. She is already building toward those victories, even if she doesn't realize it. It should start to come more into focus next chapter.