Reviews For Housebound
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Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2024 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

Pretty good start and nice cast of characters for what seems like a long-form story. I can see Ashleigh becoming a problem in the future and Bexi becoming protective. Sarah sounds like a caring mother, and Josh is a real bro. All the other characters are questionable to me.

I'm really curious what the MCs final size is gonna be and what his adventures are gonna be like. Again, something gives me a bad feeling about Ashleigh, lol.

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2024 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

So far this is off to a good start. I am not super keen on family stuff but you have given the characters strong distinct personalities and i am genuinely curious what these people do to a tiny guy. Thought the girlfriend was a touch over the top, but I imagine it will have a good payoff. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I appreciate the feedback :)

Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2024 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

Please continue!



Author's Response:

I fully intend to. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2024 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Up

amazing story! Love your world building and detailed writing. 
Cant wait to see Ashleigh get her revenge, and hopefully Bexi isnt done with her growth spurt. 

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