[Report This]Date: December 07 2024 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bigger and bigger and bigger she grows. When will it stop? Only the author knows.
Light-hearted teasing aside, this was an amusing chapter. Curious if Cassie is going to end up going on an all-out emotional rampage, given her inebriated state and whatnot. I can only imagine the chaos she may end up causing in the process, whether accidental or outright intentional, especially if Derek ends up changing his mind and opting out of hooking up.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! The next two chapters will be pretty major in terms of plot and revealing the stakes of this story. I have a busy next few days, so there will be a delay in publishing them, but I'm rather pleased to have written 35,000 words in the first week and a half of the story.
One thing I can volunteer is that I don't plan on doing a classic rampage story where the woman decides, "I'm big now, might as well destroy everything." A lot of research went into the effects of alcohol (and other substances) to create a realistic portrayal of a person under the influence. Short-term memory loss, obsessive/compulsive behavior, mood swings, a loss of social inhibition, and more we haven't seen yet.
As for the scale and the future direction of the story, we'll just have to see!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2024 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait tell the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2024 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Look forward for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I've added a lot more now, though we still haven't gotten to the growth yet. I'm on track to write 20,000 words in the first week of this story, maybe more. It's going to be a truly "epic" tale. If you have any more specific criticisms, feel free to add them as we go.
P.S. I deleted some of your old reviews because they were duplicated. Don't be discouraged from writing feedback, just wanted to do a bit of house-cleaning.
[Report This]Date: November 25 2024 9:13 AM Title: Introduction
Curious to read more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! The second chapter is up now! This story is going to start out slow, I'm afraid, but I hope the payoff is worth it!
Despite this story intending to only take place over the span of 24 hours (flashbacks not included), I'm hoping to create a complex story with character development, foreshadowing, and a lot of different perspectives.