Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 Tempting Attempt

I absolutely love the way he gets swallowed whole, but temporarily on this first occasion, leaving you the suspense to continue the story. Great descriptive quality all around, presses all the right buttons. You've really adapted marvelously to writing vore.
I can hardly wait for chapter 3. I'm sure you'll pleasantly surprise me again.

Author's Response:

I'm not that great with anatomy, but we'll see how it goes...