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Reviewer: Lil Boi Bob Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2024 3:08 AM Title: The Diagnosis

I really do hope that you update this story some day. It was just getting really good.

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2024 3:15 PM Title: Day 1 P2

New Part?

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2024 5:36 PM Title: Day 1 P2

Need to read More. Please keep up the excellent work. 

Reviewer: Lil Boi Bob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2024 7:28 AM Title: Day 1 P2

Wow! I absolutely love the added humiliation of Chase's subjugation to Delaney being broadcasted to the whole world. This is going to be sooo EXTREMELY humiliating and degrading for him, in the very worst possible ways and beyond imagination. I can tell that Delaney will have countless creative ways to degrade him, and I'm here for it! ^_^

Man, this Delaney woman you've come up with has cruelty down to an absolute art form! Everything that she says, everything she does, is so calculated to humiliate and crush him, both physically and psychologically. She's a pure predator, so psychologically brilliant in her ability to control this man and shatter his will so completely.

I don't feel like I need to give you any tips on how to make Delaney any crueler in her humiliation of him, but one thing that I'd be interested in seeing is her allowing females in her audience to give requests on things that she should do to him, which she'll do to help them feel empowered. I enjoy the thought of all these women watching him, and getting to live their revenge fantasies about the abusive men in their own lives through Chase's suffering. Oh, and I can't wait to see him in that cheerleader's outfit having to cheer and sing like a girl in front of millions of viewers! Millions of people laughing at the pathetic little sissy that he's become. The humiliation of it will be sooo crushing for him! ^_^ Definitely, keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you, believe it or not I am basing her off of a person i know so and any time i am around her I am inspired to write more.

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2024 9:49 PM Title: 1st day

We need more please!

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2024 10:37 AM Title: 1st day

We need the next part. Great work. 

Reviewer: Kell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2024 5:41 AM Title: 1st day

That was brutal as hell. Not very often you encounter a story with this level of cruelty. Serious props to you!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2024 12:02 AM Title: Training Pt 2 2 foot tall

Perfect

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2024 12:30 AM Title: Training Pt 2 2 foot tall

It's great that the new chapter came out quickly, keep it up! I love your way of describing the character eating toejam!

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2024 6:41 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Really enjoying this story, and I'm especialy excited to see more feet and humiliation stuff in Chase's future.

Would be super humiliating for a member of his own family to see that and potentially join in, but even a friend seeing/participating would be great.

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2024 5:19 PM Title: Training Pt 2 2 foot tall

the detailed descriptions of the situation are perfect for really immersing yourself in Chase's emotional state. the speed at which the story develops is also top notch. i like slow burners the best

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2024 3:42 AM Title: Training Pt 1 2 Foot Tall

Sensational story! I'm loving your details and your writing, especially this chapter, which was longer. I loved the part where Chase is forced to suck all the sweat out of her socks. I hope that in the future Alexis starts seeing another man, leaving Chase even more destroyed.

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2024 11:14 PM Title: Training Pt 1 2 Foot Tall

Amazing long live Delaney 

Author's Response: She will live on forever

Reviewer: Enollats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2024 6:07 PM Title: 4 foot 8 inches

Great direction. Please more

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 4:34 PM Title: The Diagnosis

I like your writing. My criticism is that you maybe spreading things thin with multiple stories going on at once. I'd love to see some dedication to one at a time. But that's me, and like I said you're writing is on point

Reviewer: Enollats Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 2:58 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Very nice start. Excited for more 

Reviewer: Translucity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 2:36 PM Title: The Diagnosis

Very good writing! Eager to see the continuation of it!

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