Date: April 23 2024 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Don’t know if Amanda cared more about farting on Ryan when she was awake or when she was asleep. Amazing story, their dynamic feels really alive, both characters have lots of chemistry. Love it and keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: April 22 2024 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
VERY nice so far, and I like where this is going.
Please tell me it won't devolve into random abuse at the hands of his sister or his ex...
Author's Response:
Unfortunately I can't make any promises about the future of the story, as the major decisions and overall direction are being made by someone else. I'm simply taking an outline that they provide and filling out the detail around it. I don't expect an outright hostile shift in their relationship, but I do expect their dynamic to change so much as, two people learning to live together under their current circumstances.
Hope you stay tuned to find out. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2024 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love your attention to detail, you've got a great level of description both of the physical but also emotional state of the protagonist. It also comes across as a very believable family dynamic.
The unaware action is especially my favourite and I'm enjoying how it comes across very natural. Really cannot emphasize how much I'm looking forward to more chapters!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks so much! I'm glad the story speaks to you. The person who has been commissioning this piece has very specifically noted that they are a fan of detailed interaction scenarios. Hopefully it continues to please!!
Thanks so much for reading!!