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Reviewer: Sammy15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2024 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I know this a one-off story but I think it would make a great series. continuing with the aftermath of Val and Leonard's evening and subsequent relationship.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed and while I don't disagree with you, I wouldn't hold my breath waiting for a sequel. For now, just enjoy the happy ending that our two lovebirds shared together. 

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2024 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm honored that you thought it was worthy of posting, Omanahan88.  It definitely deserved a dedicated editing session - rereading this I cringed at all the prepositions I dropped, or accidentally deleted.  Still, I'm proud of it as a whole.  I enjoyed adding little details of the mixed society, like the tiny kids sledding on a pile of shoveled snow and the cubby for a big visiting their tiny friend.  But most of all, I'm glad it was to your liking.  Writing may be an enjoyable passtime, but it really gains meaning when your writing is experienced by another.  Thanks so much for the lovely prompt, and for sharing the result with the community!



Author's Response: I often find myself going back through old stories and finding the same sort of mistakes. Such is life. All in all, I think you nailed the prompt perfectly.I tend to write cruel-skewed stories, but I absolutely love reading something feel-good. 

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