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Reviewer: MXP20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2024 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow. You got me really guessing where this is going to go. That tender moment between Alana was sweet, and you actually have me rooting for her. Damn ... Bill is so screwed no matter what happens. If Megan finds out the truth while this tiny ... I don't know what will happen to him -- or Alana. Good stuff. Can't wait to see more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Things are going to get quite dramatic very soon - you'll see.

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