i have very mixed feelings about the story overall. the smutty scenarios in a vacuum were great and had a nice amount of variety to them. its more so the story itself, or i guess the characters more specifically. i think its close to impossible to pinpoint which one of them is the shittiest person throughout everything. having a character who's a bad person is not a bad thing; far from it, in fact. it gives the potential for them to grow and makes them an even more compelling character. that didn't happen here. Alana, Claire, and even Megan face absolutely no consequences for anything. Claire even shrugs off her boyfriend's death and considers it a "net positive" and suggests that she could simply find another man who she has an equally strong bond with.

the other issue I have is how the sexual encounters are talked about. saying that Bill cheated on Claire is a bit of a stretch itself. Alana refused to take no for an answer, and you implied that he was small enough that she could overpower him. which she did. him being turned on doesn't change any of that. Bill didn't cheat, he was sexually assaulted. writing about that isn't a bad thing to do, though it may be uncomfortable, but presenting it this way just feels... gross. even after the first incident with Alana, it was just repeated over and over again. Claire disregarded his boundaries, Alana continued to disregard his boundaries, and it kept being portrayed as if it was justified. 

making someone a cheater is a fine plot point. having a character become an SA victim is fine (though certainly needs to be handled with care). but this felt like it was trying to combine both and really missed the mark. combined with the ending further pushing the idea of everything that happened to Bill being justified just doesn't sit right with me.

Great story! Really hope the next chapter is footplay focused. Lots of teasing but he's now at a great size to explore and get even tinier...

I'm so nervous about the next chapter. You put the fear of Claire into me. But I think I know where this is going ...

You got me HOOKED. I'm really enjoying this premise and I'm super curious where you're gonna take it. I'm seeing the F/f tag and I'm on the edge of my seat, wondering which chick is going is gonna be shrunk. Great job. Thanks for sharing!

Please continue and finish the story. Please don't end up like the countless stories on here that never get to their full potential.

I'll be watching this one closely... I hope you plan to go super small and maybe have Claire use the pills on the neighbor girl or some other girls she's jealous of!