[Report This]Date: March 03 2024 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: She Shrunk Me
Just commenting here to compliment your writing overall. I've almost finished Adventures and I'm just starting here from chapter 2 - I enjoy the time you take to develop and explore characters, instead of just writing smud (not that there's anything wrong with it, just a preference). Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories!
Author's Response:
I'm glad people are still reading it, thanks for the feedback. I don't mind adding the development; it adds motivation to continue because I have to tie things up. I'm bad for not finishing stories and need all the help I can get...!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2024 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: When Alex Came Over
What a great story, I wonder where this will lead
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, Freet. It could go virtually anywhere, right up to the point I actually upload.
Date: February 20 2024 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 2: She Shrunk Me
Very good start from a story perspective. I hope you change your mind and edit their ages. It would work with an older age and despite your intent of it only to be about the story, anything size-related on this website is inherently sexual in nature.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback, johnsmith. Totally valid point. I knew it was risky with kid characters, even briefly, this early stuff is only designed to be prologue and the story technically starts once they're adults, which is hopefully as soon as I can naturally work it in. The reason it was done like this may become clearer later in the story.