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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 08 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

Rats! I was sure this chapter would show the Johnsons being overwhelmed and teleported to Sizeloa! Well; maybe in the next sequel.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2009 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

I feel sorry for Brandon. All he wants is to to be with his wife but with all the trubble that seems to be  following them its not ease for him. His wife Rachel is a gts goddess and can't die but its still dangerous for him, i think they need put the rule on hold and make him a god so he cam be with his wife and not worrying about being killed.

They make men sound so bad, but not all men are bad. Most of the killing that goes on is done by women and not by men.

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