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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2024 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story.  A few grammatical errors {e.g. once "his" rather than "hers"} yet still incredible. Love her manipulation of him, how specific words matter so much.

Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed. And yeah, roofreading is defientely something I need to work on for future projects. 

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