Date: January 10 2024 8:21 PM Title: Shinjuku
Fun story, and the ending was really cute. I love the use of tactile pavement as shelter in this. That was something that always stood out to me when I visited Tokyo, how they have that lining all the sidwalks and transit stops, so it's cool to see it used in a sizey context. I also thought the description of Yuumi's scale compared to Nicholas when they first encounter was very vivid, and I liked the flipping between their perspectives in that moment.
Thanks for the praise! That tactile pavement is everywhere and it was really interesting seeing blind people use it, so I wanted to use it for something sizey.
Really glad you enjoyed it!