Reviewer: ShrinkJoe Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2024 8:21 PM Title: Too Good To Be True

I absolutely thrive on this level of unaware interaction! Normally, I'm more inclined towards slightly larger sizes than nano, like bug size or smaller, but the concept of being trapped in such a place while your parent(s) loom above, perceiving what to them is merely a carpet, is incredibly enticing. The added tension of the son trying to capture their attention adds a compelling and helpless layer to the narrative.

I love your descriptions of feet, the act of being around them, and how they look. The mom taking a step was breathtaking (literally), and then falling between her toes as the mom walks on, leaving him in darkness? Incredible. 

I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

Reviewer: Ascension73 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2024 5:22 PM Title: Too Good To Be True

This is really fantastic stuff! I really enjoyed the descriptive shrinking process to get to microscopic sizes. Really great set up so far. And I can’t wait to see where the main character ends up next

Author's Response:

Thank you! I was hoping to nail that entire sequence. Spencer is going to have a rough time, that is for sure

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2024 11:06 AM Title: Too Good To Be True

nice story so far

Author's Response: ありがとうございましたz90;

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2024 1:15 AM Title: Too Good To Be True

Realy nice first chapter; Looking forward for the next one 

Author's Response:

Thank you!