Date: February 12 2024 8:35 PM Title: Depths of the Carpet
Love your story, you are the best! Love nano, love unaware!
I hope Spencer ends up under Gina's toenail, or her toe jam, stuck on her insole, or sinking into her sweaty yoga mat while her bare feet push him deeper, or that he shrinks more, or why not all together? I have so many ideas, whether you follow my ideas or not I will love it, whatever you write will be good!
Date: February 03 2024 8:21 PM Title: Too Good To Be True
I absolutely thrive on this level of unaware interaction! Normally, I'm more inclined towards slightly larger sizes than nano, like bug size or smaller, but the concept of being trapped in such a place while your parent(s) loom above, perceiving what to them is merely a carpet, is incredibly enticing. The added tension of the son trying to capture their attention adds a compelling and helpless layer to the narrative.
I love your descriptions of feet, the act of being around them, and how they look. The mom taking a step was breathtaking (literally), and then falling between her toes as the mom walks on, leaving him in darkness? Incredible.
I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
Date: January 27 2024 2:16 PM Title: Depths of the Carpet
Nice. Is it bad I hope he ends up lost at her work and stuck to a stranger when she goes home.
Author's Response:
Not at all, haha
[Report This]Date: January 26 2024 3:58 PM Title: Too Good To Be True
This is incredible work! Can’t wait for more! This is going to be epic
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope it all lives up to expectations
Date: January 09 2024 5:22 PM Title: Too Good To Be True
This is really fantastic stuff! I really enjoyed the descriptive shrinking process to get to microscopic sizes. Really great set up so far. And I can’t wait to see where the main character ends up next
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was hoping to nail that entire sequence. Spencer is going to have a rough time, that is for sure
[Report This]Date: January 09 2024 2:46 PM Title: Too Good To Be True
Good stuff. I hope the sister comes back.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Gina will return
Date: January 09 2024 11:06 AM Title: Too Good To Be True
nice story so far
Author's Response: ありがとうございましたz90;
[Report This]Date: January 09 2024 6:40 AM Title: Too Good To Be True
Good Stuff. Unaware scenarios are always the best and nice touch with the older women
Author's Response:
Nano and unaware are the best pair
[Report This]Date: January 09 2024 1:15 AM Title: Too Good To Be True
Realy nice first chapter; Looking forward for the next one
Author's Response:
Thank you!