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Reviewer: SamNorton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 2 / Ms. Donovan & Dave

Nice first chapters describing the first growing episodes around the campus

I liked that the growth is random, that not all the people in the chapter are growing, like in this one that only Ms donovan is becoming a huge muscular amazon.

Loved that the people are becoming taller and also more muscular

It will be possible to know the heights of the newly grown characters?

Congrats, can't wait to see the next chapters :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! I was planning on releasing a few chapters depicting the growth of the characters as introduced them and figured this would be a good way to do it. 


Yes, I liked the idea of having not everyone grow but those who do becoming vastly more powerful than those who stayed the same. 


I actually meant to leave tags at the ends of the chapters to say how big everyone had gotten, but I’ve went back and added them now.  

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 / Ms. Donovan & Dave

Nice & steamy addition to the story. I'm guessing the format will be a series of one-shots throughout the broader story, unless you decide to revisit characters here and there every few chapters. No numerical size descriptors in this chapter, so I'm guessing that Ms. Donovan is around 11-12 feet tall or so by this point. Anyways, curious what the next chapter brings...

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