Date: February 03 2024 3:30 PM Title: Morning Chill
Please make more of this
Date: December 28 2023 3:18 PM Title: An Outing with Master
After reading your replies, you do seem worried about whether the content is boring or not, and I understand that, since I've felt that feeling before. But I say that it's okay to have a non-sexual (G or PG) rated story. I end up skipping the vaginal cave diving present in most stories, I like reading about the size differences, feelings of characters regarding such things, fear and hope, etc. Spending a little time expressing differences in power really gets my heart tugged. Asexual gentle interactions aren't bad. I just like seeing the big people peacefully interacting with the smaller people, or even having to convince them of their pure intentions.
Author's Response:
"I end up skipping the vaginal cave diving present in most stories"
I can relate. Still write that kinda stuff if someone commissions it, but I realize I've been losing interest in writing it for myself. I guess it's the erotica writer's version of getting tired of sleeping around so much and wanting to settle down and start a family instead. Problem is I still don't fully understand what makes this sort of story tick, so I can only play it by ear and feel it out as I go.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 7:49 PM Title: An Outing with Master
This was really cute. I think you did a good job writing slice of life. I like the focus on our protagonists and their characterization with small hints of worldbuilding tossed in here and there; that's the sort of pacing I'd expect from a good slice of life tale.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was actually pretty confident about the more technical aspects like pacing, I just worried that the actual contents of the story wouldn't be all that interesting to people.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 7:09 PM Title: An Outing with Master
I like it, short, sweet, covers the quick points of a gentle world with "inchlings" being a class that aren't quite on the level of humans, but are still valued. I like the dynamic with the big maid and the tiny master, trying to maintain "proper" roles even with the size disparity causing awkwardness, I'd like to see more of how they deal with day to day stuff, I can just imagine how protective a giant maid would get about her tiny master when he's sick or has some minor injury.
Anyways for a first outing this is pretty good, hope to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! As much as I was confident in my technical ability as a writer to tackle this story, I was afraid that the actual content of the story would be too boring for people without stronger sexual or romantic themes, or more physical interactions emphasizing the size difference. Glad to see that's not the case.