Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2023 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Two Participants Meet

Not sure what's up with Italian women with weird surnames (*), but tldr: wow!!!

Imho there's something weird with the way you described her hobbies - last month X, the month __after__ Y, then Z... that or it's an English construction I've never seen before.

(*) Does it even exist? afaik it's a pun on Berlusconi + "burle"/"burlesque"

Author's Response:

Honestly, it was a typo to use "u" instead of "e" but I'd like to think I was subconsciously making that burlesque reference!

Very glad you enjoyed Part 1.  Part 2 gets crazy!