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Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2009 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was an excellent read, great imagination.

Author's Response:

My you have been busy thank you once again for such encouraging comments.x

Amanda.

Reviewer: daniel222 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2009 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

love the way you write your storys and the way you feel so strongly about your fantasy.

hard for me to see innocent kids or ppl suffering without wanting it, but as long as i imagine that it's me there and not them, then it's really ok :) just wish it could be really me there in reallity.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it a good story should make the reader happy,sad,angry warm inside sexy even, so if my choice of words regarding the taking of innocence from ones so young has touched you emotionally then my fanyasy world has filled your heart with the sorrow associated with such a horrific deed.I feel that i have been succesfull in giving you a small part of me to keep and cherish thank you once again for your kind encouraging words take care x.

Amanda.

Reviewer: yummy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2009 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amanda:  Excellent!  Very well done, as usual!  I would gladly take the place of any one of the three males in this story! 

Author's Response:

Hello Yummy and i would gladly accept your sacrifice as one of the lucky ones whom i choose to become a small part of me.

Amanda.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2009 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

The sentences are a little run-on. Otherwise, this is sounding just like some of Stan Williams' work. And, I mean that as high praise!

Author's Response:

Thank you i am honoured that i am being compared with such an acclaimed author.

Amanda.

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