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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2023 6:16 AM Title: Capsules

The constant name interactions are a bit confusing, especially since they are not common names.  Other than that, an interesting story so far. 

The different engineered characters are nice; yet a bit hard to follow as their identities are similar in name, as in many starting with the letter "M" are comparable to homonyms.

Am looking forward to where this story goes.  It's actually quite good and intriguing.  Can't wait to read more, well done so far/

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