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Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2024 1:41 AM Title: Warm Spit

The treatment of that kitsune is kind of sad, I hope she ends up ok.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2024 9:06 PM Title: Warm Spit

Looks like koko is making her move

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2024 9:00 PM Title: Girls' Night Out

I just saw the mouse Nathan, nice work 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2024 10:38 PM Title: Girls' Night Out

Interesting. I wonder how this will  affect Naomi while she is a nekomimi

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 4:46 PM Title: Parity

Well, that was interesting. I'm still hoping neko naomi returns to mouse naomi, but that last line was ominous.

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2023 11:23 PM Title: Body Heat

Glad to so the series get this sequel.  Thanks for the chapters

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2023 5:12 PM Title: Body Heat

Interesting. For a moment I thought it would reverse both of them, turning Noah into Naomi and Tanji into a human. Either that or with what they were doing I thought Noah would turn into Naomi and fall inside Tanji's womanhood. Still it is good. Though i do hope Naomi returns to her normal mouse form simply because it has a bigger chance of her being swallowed. Maybe with a reversal where Tanjo gets turned into a Mouse girl as well and they both get swallowed by someone hopefully unaware. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2023 7:32 PM Title: Market

Koko is now the master? Why do I get the feeling kokori's going to try to turn Noah into Naomi to make her Naomi's master as well.



Author's Response:

I think I can definitely do something interesting with that premise. 

By the way, thank you for the continual support of the series. It really means a lot.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2023 5:18 AM Title: Super! Ocean! Showdown!

So close to being swallowed...oh well it was still a good chapter. Looking forward for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2023 1:38 PM Title: Warm Rain

Almost time for the beach party! That will also let me know if Naomi gets unaware swallowed like my last review. I can't wait! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 20 2023 6:16 AM Title: Capsules

The constant name interactions are a bit confusing, especially since they are not common names.  Other than that, an interesting story so far. 

The different engineered characters are nice; yet a bit hard to follow as their identities are similar in name, as in many starting with the letter "M" are comparable to homonyms.

Am looking forward to where this story goes.  It's actually quite good and intriguing.  Can't wait to read more, well done so far/

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 6:57 PM Title: Warm Rain

Wonderful. I love the return of Naomi. And at a beach party. Is it bad I hope she ends up falling in the food and unaware swallowed by another mimi? I love unaware vore especially if it is full tour with the tiny surviving. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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