[Report This]Date: November 27 2009 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great job.
Author's Response:
This is my own work so for this i can comment and i thank you for your kind words Vito did it inspire you,if so then i have succeded in my task x.
Amanda.
Date: November 25 2009 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
thank you for this story, i really like it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words Daniel xx.
Amanda.
Date: November 22 2009 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you like it. I just can't think of any more content at the moment. I seem to have drawn a blank. Would you like to do a new chapter of it?
Author's Response:
Like....i love it little one you have a unique perspective the way you set the scene i am not sure that my input would benefit the story.It's a pity the forum did not have a facility to pose such questions to the other forum members,they could maybe vote on it and that would then guide the stories direction.I shall concider your suggestion i must say i am delighted that you would allow me to contribute to your delectable tale,thank you little one xx.
Amanda.
[Report This]Date: November 22 2009 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still at awe, I love your stories very well written
Author's Response:
where here you have been i have missed talking to you,don't you like me any more(only teasing) thanks you are being very kind as usual and i love you for it lets talk again sometime soon take care xxx.
Amanda.
Date: November 20 2009 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
"he world outside inches away and yet beyond his reach. "
Very well written perspective on Tony's situation.
Agrader
Author's Response:
Thank you little for your kind review when are you going to write chapter five i am really looking forward to her next meal xx.
Amanda.