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Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2024 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad to see you back and writing this story. The interesting direction we are going is intriguing and looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling 

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling 

Reviewer: bluedefender Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story is awsome.

I’m keeping myself to read more.English is not m’y foreign laguage.But you are easy to read.Thank you for your work.And thank you for sharing your hard work with us.

Reviewer: 7inch peepee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2023 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just forgot to rate it so ignore this lol

Reviewer: 7inch peepee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2023 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's been a while since a real high-quality story been posted on this website! 

Your writing is superb and the way you describe scenes is just amazing! Really excited for the future of this story



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the ride! 

Reviewer: Rusty Shackelford Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2023 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely loving this narrative. The relationship between Josephine and Jake is great, but I am also hoping to see Katelyn get ahold of Jake at some point. Very excited to see what that interaction would look like and see how Josephine reacts to it. 



Author's Response:

That chapter is coming friend. Just hope I can still get into heaven after I publish that one.

Reviewer: foxhoundtkd Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2023 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! But damn Joes got some serious mood swing issues



Author's Response:

Teenagers amiright? 

Reviewer: Jaato Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2023 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really loving this story so far. Especially the interactions between Jake and Josephine. Keep up the good work!


Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words!

Reviewer: Ess-rets Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2023 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is really incredible! The character building is well made, the reader really wants to discover more about them. And damn it's packed in action!


Very good I hope you will write more! 



Author's Response:

Appreciate it! 

Reviewer: hanssmith7670 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2023 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving where this is going! Excellent build up and excitement along the way to the shrinking. Enjoying the dynamic between the characters too! Will be keeping an eye on this one for sure! Great work! Cant wait to see jake at the feet of jose and kate!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!!

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