[Report This]Date: May 21 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 5 part 3 of 3
My favorite scene was Lucy protecting Albert from the semi truck in chapter 4.
My least favorite aspect of this story was Lucy's worsening psychosis. Her thoughts about the pregnant woman in chapter 5 sickened me.
I'm still reading through chapter 5 part 3. It will honestly be difficult to get through the rest if Lucy continues to deteriorate into a sociopath.
However, I have to say I loved her protective relationship with Albert. That aspect of this story (which I started reading years ago) inspired the primary theme of the story I authored on this site.
Finally, you mentioned in a comment on Consequences:
It reminds me of an idea I'm having fun with in which a group of rather powerful beings actually enjoy a level of pleasure comparable to a narchotic whenever they're nurting a weaker being to the point that if they don't have someone to take care of they go into withdrawl.
If you wrote that, I'd definitely read it! Sounds like a great idea to me.