Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2023 5:36 PM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit

This is one of my favorite stories on the site thus far. Its so good, both the romance and the sexy stuff. I really hope we get way more of this. Also since we are introducing spells, maybe have a temporary invisibility spell so that there can be some unaware content, maybe even with some characters other than Molly. 

Also, maybe do a “Meaningful Life”-type thing where he overhears conversations of people who he thought didn’t like him or undervalued him, where they posthumously realize his value. Idk if it would work in your story but it seems like it could be a cool side angle.

Author's Response:

Thank you! My original plan was to have two more chapters (for a total of seven), but it's possible those get split into 1-2 more depending on how long they end up being. I don't want to include something like invisibility because that would diminish the threat of being discovered, thus making the story less interesting by eliminating the few stakes it has. Your other idea is neat, but I don't have any plans on writing something like that.

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2023 10:35 AM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit

I'm loving what you've done with this story, and I ca't wait to see where it goes next, though I'm getting the inkling it will be somewhere both sweet and sexy, and I'm all for it.

I'm pleased with how you've developed Renton throughout these chapters.  It reinforces him as a good, but still human(ish) man.  The small size has been both the expected challenge, and a constant driver for the plot progression, as it should be, but I'm pleased to see it hasn't entirely robbed him of agency.  Even if most of the events are acting upon him, his indestructibility allows his persostence to shine through in key ways, and the occasional presence of a dedicated, if selectively reserved full-size angel butler helps him act through her.

I'm loving that even in acting as an agent for Renton, Petra is also playing her own game, and she does so with a deftness that speaks to a significant amout of prior experience. If her short term goals are what they seem, I sincerely hope she is successful.

I can't end this without giving kudos to Molly's character.  The woman is dedicated, loyal, driven, and most importantly, loving beyond the pale, and I avsolutely love her character for that.  I'm also loving her more devious and assertive side.

So far everyone and everything is engaging, enticing, and a balm for the heart. Thanks again for writing this.  I can't wait to see how it ends!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! If you'll take a peek into my crystal ball, you shall see that the future is assuredly sexy and sweet (and perhaps a bit more).

Making tinies in these stories interesting characters in their own right is what I believe to be a necessary challenge. Obviously, everyone (including myself) is here for the giantess, and it's easy to get lost in detailing the character of our desires, but neglecting the smaller half of the story often leads to a lesser narrative (especially in gentle stories where tinies aren't dying in droves). It's hard because, as you've said, at that size a lot of things are happening to him without him being able to do much to others, so agency becomes difficult to maintain. I like to focus in on their personality, inner thoughts/reactions, and on what they are capable of doing to maintain the tinies' presence and agency in the story, which I'm glad can be seen in Ren here. 

Petra's a lot of fun. She was the first character I came up with for this story, and writing her has been a blast. I'm glad Molly's character landed too. 

Reviewer: redeyes98 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 8:28 PM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit

Loving this series! Can’t wait to see the next chapters 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope to have the next one done in a couple weeks or so.