Date: April 22 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked how this was building up, however it seemed to end so suddenly. I guess its always nice to leave them wanting more. A sequel perhaps?
Author's Response: Oh, more than "perhaps!" Don't worry, though. I don't intend to re-create all five of the Jeff Manley stories, here. Just the first three.
Date: November 03 2009 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is better than the idea i once discarded, to do a yarn about a fan who shrinks himself and gets himself mailed to his favourite actress, only to learn she's willing to eat him. I think you could take your story anywhere, and I look forward to another chapter / sequel to this.
Author's Response: Thanks! Although, I did make one blooper, which I've since corrected. It's the late, great ALAN Napier that played Alfred Pennyworth from 1966-68. CHARLES Napier is an American character actor who's been portraying criminal musclemen and private-eye-hating cops (with equal versatility) since the 1970's.