Date: April 06 2024 9:46 PM Title: Let's have a little chat.
This story is fantastic! It has been years since I liked something on this site enough to leave a review. This story is everything I like in giantess stories. Smut is good but I like it the best when stories take their premise seriously and explore the many issues that come from mixed sizes trying to live and interact with each other.
Every time I think I have a favorite chapter, a new favorite pops up. This frank discussion between Emily and Jane was great. Janes realization that despite her disgust at the notion of losing her freedom, that she was basically already Emily's pet and is better off for it was both surprising and compelling.
The only think I would have like to see in this story, both in this chapter and in previous chapters, is more description of the size difference between the parties and more consequences. Like, if Jane is 2 inches tall, Emily and the girls must be really, truly mountainous from her POV. Gigantic to the point that their footsteps shake the ground and their voices crack like thunder. The fact that Jane is willing and able to stand her ground and argue against these titans is something worth remarking upon. Either she should be far more afraid than she is or her uncommon bravery should be mentioned. The fact that she is constantly unphased by everything going on around her is honestly pretty jarring when I'm trying to picture these scenes in my mind.
Anyway, I hope we get to see a lot more Nadia before Suki's arc is wrapped up, the relationship between the two and Nadia's journey from angry victim to turncoat pet (friend?) is also one of my favorite things about this story. I hope we get to see more of her reactions to the horrors Suki commits and hear her rationalizations for liking her anyway. Maybe an argument between her and a future snack?
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
I am delighted to receive such a glowing review!
The fact that you like my story so much makes me very happy! It's wonderful to know that the effort I put into my story is appreciated!
The idea of emphasizing the importance of the difference in size between tiny folks and humans is a great one, and actually something that I should have done in the first place! It would have given a lot more energy to some of the earlier chapters, and it would have highlighted the power imbalance between the two sides in an extraordinary way. Definitely going to implement it in the next chapter!
Thanks for the awesome suggestion!
As for as the final saga is concerned, I don't want to give too much away. But I will say that Suki and Nadia are going to be the main protagonists, and I intend to give both of them their share of the spotlight and tie up any loose ends before I bring the story to a close.
Once again, thank you for the review and the support! I hope you continue to enjoy reading what I have written!