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Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 3:29 PM Title: Ch 8. Farewell to Yesterday

Loving this story!

I'm really hoping the discussion about The Man Called Revolver is showing its greater relevance here (the gun twirl is a great callback to suggest it is).  Great twist, great foreshadowing, great callback, I'm just in awe.  (I'm also thankful to see Lanz's tiny contact wasn't female.  No need to conflate the current situation with April 30th, at least not at this stage.)

I'm excited to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next one will be a doozy.

Reviewer: Mad_Scientist Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2023 11:48 AM Title: Ch 8. Farewell to Yesterday

Nothing could have prepared for that twist! I already feel bad for Miriam when she finds out!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to see you're still enjoying this story!

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