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Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2023 11:37 AM Title: Ch 5. A Walk Through the Woods

Awww, that was absolutely adorable!  Lanz is growing as a person, embracing the side of himself kept forcibly suppressed for so long.  He expressed himself quite well.  And then poor Miriam is catching feelings.  I hope that's a chronic concern.

The tooth has me quite intrigued.  My guess is tracker, since a suicide tooth probably would have cracked with that extraction method.  Glad to see Lanz is taking steps to distance himself from his bloodsoaked past, and to hold onto the woman he has. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured some emotional development was needed after the prior chapter's carnal carnival. Always happy to make some hearts melt.

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