Date: December 03 2023 5:46 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
I've been on this website for 3+ years. Never made an account. But this story was something else. All I can say is... Bra...fucking....O. Good shit mate
Wow, I'm honored to hear that! Thank you! I'm overjoyed by how much love this story has garnered.
Date: November 27 2023 7:13 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Such a good story! I love a slow burn and all your scenes are written so well. Couldn’t ask for a better ending. Can’t wait to read more of your work!
Thank you! I'm of the belief that a slow burn leads to a more satisfying payoff, so I'm happy to hear you appreciate that. I like to go all out with my endings, make them as happy/satisfying as can be. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: November 26 2023 11:19 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This has been a great one all around. After Mixing Sizes I had no doubts about your ability to write a good giantess-tiny relationship, but here you did it while also writing a good desert island story! The setting, the characters, the twists, the ending, I liked everything here.
Thank you! I wanted to write something more plot-centric since slice of life is more of my go-to, and militaristic deserted island story seemed like it'd be fun to write. I'm glad to hear I pulled it off lol.
Date: November 25 2023 4:57 AM Title: Ch 1. Lost
I really thought this story was the total package. Good characterization. Good descriptions of the environment, and some really nice sex scenes. I loved it! I could tell that you spell checked and went over grammar, and I wish more people would do that too. I will look for more of your writing in the future, keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! I'm quite proud of how this one turned out. Hearing that my environmental descriptions were good makes me happy because I struggle with that more than the other two things you mentioned (though I'm glad you enjoyed those too!). I always proofread and revise every chapter before uploading it. I think doing so is kinda the bare minimum when sharing writing. I take pride in this stuff, and it'd bother me if it were full of errors (admittedly, I can't always catch everything during revision, but I try my best). Thank you for appreciating that.
Date: November 21 2023 1:28 PM Title: Ch 9. The No More Hero
I was so hoping that Lanz's double-cross was a ruse-- and I'm so relieved that it was. great chapter!
Thank you! I figured the ruse would make for a good wrench to toss into the story. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: November 15 2023 7:43 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
Amazing series, I was hooked right away! The storytelling and character development and relationship-building is superb! Always excited when I see a new chapter posted!
Thank you so much! The characters' development and how their relationship transformed are very important to this story and thus required a lot of effort (and stress) out of me, so it's good to see that paid off. I'm working hard on the next chapter as we speak!
Date: November 12 2023 8:26 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This is one of the best stories I have seen here! But the end of chapter really made me sad hopefully he is just acting infornt of his country man
Thank you! You'll just have to wait and see.
Date: November 11 2023 3:29 PM Title: Ch 8. Farewell to Yesterday
Loving this story!
I'm really hoping the discussion about The Man Called Revolver is showing its greater relevance here (the gun twirl is a great callback to suggest it is). Great twist, great foreshadowing, great callback, I'm just in awe. (I'm also thankful to see Lanz's tiny contact wasn't female. No need to conflate the current situation with April 30th, at least not at this stage.)
I'm excited to see what happens next!
Thank you! Next one will be a doozy.
Date: November 09 2023 11:37 AM Title: Ch 5. A Walk Through the Woods
Awww, that was absolutely adorable! Lanz is growing as a person, embracing the side of himself kept forcibly suppressed for so long. He expressed himself quite well. And then poor Miriam is catching feelings. I hope that's a chronic concern.
The tooth has me quite intrigued. My guess is tracker, since a suicide tooth probably would have cracked with that extraction method. Glad to see Lanz is taking steps to distance himself from his bloodsoaked past, and to hold onto the woman he has.
Yeah, I figured some emotional development was needed after the prior chapter's carnal carnival. Always happy to make some hearts melt.
Date: November 09 2023 12:54 AM Title: Ch 4. Taking What Can Never Be Returned
"I solemnly swear I have never harmed, nor intended harm, nor had a negative thought about the Fidelphi nation, or about Fidelphi individuals. Please do not send the Reaper's Little Helper. I've been good, I swear!"
Lanz officially terrifies me. That's some hardcore programming, but that pales in comparison to his lethality.
(Small side note: I find myself wondering if the bullets used on the captive were not poisoned. Or does the poison only affect bigs?)
Was the "I'll spare no expense" line inspired by John Hammond? It's a good line.
The fishing scene was golden. I love seeing Lanz warming up and breaking out of that shell, and I'm impressed as all hell that he pulled in a fish twice his size without a reel.
As for the Eagle scene, it was touching to hear her almost confess how lonely she would be without him. And if Miriam ever wants to play receiver on my football team, I'll happily send balls her way - with every expectation she'll take them well in hand. Seriously, impressive catch.
Note to self: if traveling while tiny and at risk of being marooned with a giantess on a deserted island, always bring plenty of soap. Preferably shaped to be wearable.
Miriam's intensity in taking Lanz's V-card was something to behold. Very hot. Very well written.
Thank you for reading! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter (and the escapades within).
I wasn't sure if I wanted to include the flashback at first, but it was so fun writing it, given how different it is from what I normally write, that I'm happy I did it. The line you mentioned was not inspired by John Hammond as I completely forgot about that part of Jurassic Park, but that's a good pull, and there will be references to stuff in later chapters.
As for the bullets... yeah, that was kind of an oversight on my part. They are still poisoned because that's how Fidelphi makes all its ammunition for its military (given they are almost always fighting bigs, its more efficient to just treat all their ammo. It's really only special situations, like with Lanz, where they are targeting other tinies, and bullets are effective no matter what against them.) Now, realistically, the poison should probably have a stronger effect on tinies since it'd be a larger dose to their smaller bodies, but my logic at the time (which I definitely did not do a good job of expressing in the text) is that because the toxin is synthetic, it's designed to target nerve ends in the body part it penetrates, so it has the same effect on any creature no matter the size (again, have no clue if the science on that tracks anywhere outside my head, but I figure in a setting where people can be five inches tall, I can maybe skew scientific fact here and there, I dunno). Even though their poisoned and paralyzing, the victim still feels the initial shock/pain of the bullet entering their body before their limb goes numb.
The football analogy was one of those things I thought of before I even fully figured out the context for it. Like, Lanz is going to be caught and I'm going to describe it like that because it sounds cool lol.
Wearable soap is a great idea. So great that it almost makes me reconsider sabotaging the soap supply so you're stuck with an unwashed giantess (as you should prefer!)
Glad you enjoyed Miriam's "cherry boy hunting." I love that sort of dynamic and was afraid it wouldn't be well-received, but people seemed to dig it, so that's a relief.
Date: October 26 2023 2:51 PM Title: Ch 1. Lost
This story is very well written akin to any NYTimes best seller and very enjoyable at that. Thank You!
Thank you for the high praise! I'll have to speak to someone at the Times to get my smut in the running lol.
Date: October 15 2023 2:55 PM Title: Ch 4. Taking What Can Never Be Returned
The bit about Myriam's eyes was genius, imo
Thank you! Yeah, that was a fun idea I thought of when I first described Lanz's eyes back in chapter 1. Seemed like a good parallel to draw lol.
Date: October 15 2023 10:04 AM Title: Ch 4. Taking What Can Never Be Returned
Damn this was one hell of a read, just discovered this story and loved every second of it. You’re writing skills are immaculate.
Thank you so much! That's really nice of you to say.