Reviews For A Martyr's Love
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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I tried reading it, and I realize English is a second language. At first it was the switching between him and her, which I could get past, but the large sections where you switch between languages kinda ruin it. If you’re using google translate, perhaps you should paste different sections and proofread before publishing. The latest chapter has roughly a third in another language leaving the reader completely lost unless they know both.

Author's Response:

thank you, now i did it

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2023 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I’m a bit confused. You shifted between describing Martyr as “him” and “her” regularly.

Author's Response:

read again, I only put "she" when there's a girl in the line.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2023 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

I wish to see a world where moms and milfs are twice size bigger than men and youg girls 

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