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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2024 1:33 PM Title: Reunited

Great chapter! As much as I love Allura, I can’t deny that Sunra is the domineering kind of lady that deserves her own story~



Author's Response:

Yes we might need to explore the Old Kingdom sometime

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2024 1:17 PM Title: Reunited

Nice. I wish there were more scenes with the Old Kingdom in the story. I would like to see more of them.

Author's Response:

Thanks! They're not a major focus of this one, maybe in future tales.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 5:57 PM Title: Amun Ra

This was a really fun chapter!   I like how Steven's imprisonment was written, and his relationship with the Old Kingdom woman.



Author's Response:

It's a more hostile relationship than he's used to, we'll see a little more of her before the end!

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 6:03 PM Title: Amun Ra

I was wondering if the Old Kingdom or someone from it would have a role in the story.



Author's Response:

Yep, Starla's just a pawn of theirs

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2024 9:47 PM Title: Green Zone

Is this one on hiatus again?



Author's Response: Mostly due to my own irl scheduling issues, I should have a new chapter for this one this weekend or early next week sometime.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2024 5:18 AM Title: A Night at the Theater

Fun as always!

I know this is beyond the scope of your current plans,   but I would love to see the Old Kingdom do a surprise attack and actually temporarily win.   They could start converting earth males from bonded to non-bonded including Steven, and it would be up to Allura to save him!   

Just found one typo in this chapter:

error / fixed

glard / glared



Author's Response:

Typo fixed!

The Old Kingdom will make a move soon, and while they probably won't take Earth, they might take a certain Earth man...

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2024 4:30 AM Title: A Night at the Theater

Great chapter! Very tense at times. Hopefully the Old Kingdom Ambassador gets to make good on some of those offers to Steven.

Author's Response:

They're definitely into some earth men themselves!

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 10:22 PM Title: Green Zone

With every new chapter, I keep loving this story so much!   I am looking forward to more of the espionage plot, and am anxious to see how the conflict develops.   If you get to the point where they go off world, I would be excited for that too.   Great job, as usual!



Author's Response:

Thanks, we'll see the Stelan homeworld near the end of the story, we've got about 4-5 chapters left from here.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2023 4:33 AM Title: Lodestar

Yay! So glad this story is back!!  I really like the conflict of desires, and the idea of compromise.   I also really love the breastfeeding scenes.    Maybe you'll get to insertion at some point too.



Author's Response:

Forgot to respond to this one, but thanks! I'm sure we'll get an insertion scene before the end.

Reviewer: Toerider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2023 10:24 PM Title: Green Zone

This is absolutely fantastic!  I can't wait to see what happens. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's going to be fun!

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2023 3:39 AM Title: Separation Anxiety

Great story and I'm anticipating the next chapter. I love the dialog and how protective Allura is of Steven.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Allura is definitely becoming more protective and possessive of him as it goes on.

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2023 2:21 AM Title: Assistant to the Regional Manager

Fun domination stuff all around.  Pretty great so far.



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2023 1:49 AM Title: Green Zone

Great first chapter. A lot of interesting ideas being set up for the future. I especially like that our MC isn’t super on board with everything in this set up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, yeah he's a little leery of the whole thing for now

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2023 10:41 PM Title: Assistant to the Regional Manager

The plot thickens! And it seems we have a new person of interest. I wonder if Steven might have to do some spy work and get close to a certain Stelan. I was expecting just some office hijinks, but we’re getting a whole corporate espionage plot here haha. Excited to see how the Old Kingdom is going to come into play. Keep up the great work! 



Author's Response: Yeah there's an espionage plot going on here too, a good chance for Steven to show he's more than just along for the ride.

Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2023 6:48 PM Title: Old Friends and New Problems

You know, it would be funny if a woman from the Old Empire wanted Steven for herself. Just an intrusive thought.



Author's Response:

Oh that would be so awkward lol

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 6:19 PM Title: Don't Dip the Pen in Company Ink

Damn you should write more stories like this!

Author's Response: The commissioner certainly has good taste, doesn't he?

Reviewer: UHF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 3:01 AM Title: Green Zone

This might be the best giantess story I've ever read.


Seriously, I mean it.



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it so far, it's got a ways to go yet but we'll get there! Lots of office intrigue, espionage, and giant ladies left to go!

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2023 2:41 AM Title: Don't Dip the Pen in Company Ink

Fantastic story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2023 11:52 PM Title: Don't Dip the Pen in Company Ink

Steven sure is a lucky guy. He has Allura and Sula all over him! The little mention makes me wonder if Caridia might get in on the fun too? Can’t wait for more! 



Author's Response:

Yeah his office is a fun place, Caridia has a part to play obviously.

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2023 7:57 PM Title: Everybody's Working for the Weekend

Damn cant wait for more

Author's Response:

More is coming!

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