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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 5:57 PM Title: Amun Ra

This was a really fun chapter!   I like how Steven's imprisonment was written, and his relationship with the Old Kingdom woman.



Author's Response:

It's a more hostile relationship than he's used to, we'll see a little more of her before the end!

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2024 6:03 PM Title: Amun Ra

I was wondering if the Old Kingdom or someone from it would have a role in the story.



Author's Response:

Yep, Starla's just a pawn of theirs

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